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5/29 c12 Guest
Continue fast! I love it!
5/29 c12 HeartSNS
The story was adorable! I found it had a slow build and I read how u were struggling with where to end. I had hoped that there was gonna be some jealous feelings and miscommunications or misunderstandings with the new pediatrician on the floor heh

But if you have the ending already figured out, guess I’ll just have to wait ... u sure there no crazy angst, kidnapping by aliens, car crashes during a fight or the planet being taken over by slugs? Hehehehe

Can’t wait for the end!

May your muse be with you:)
5/29 c12 SerpensPrincess
Loving! Can't wait for more.
5/28 c12 sparrowhawk13
Lovely, a jealous Sasuke!
4/30 c1 yunjae9603
Just found this fic Actually recc-ed by tumblr. Loving this
10/30/2017 c1 3Vampiremaker8
I hope a new chapter will be up soon?
6/15/2017 c11 Guest
KEEP IT SOIGHTLY HEAVY AND ADD LIKE A SECRET LIVE INTEREST OUT TO SNATCH PRETTY NARUTO AWAY

Wait that's to common. Make it so that Sasuke is spending less time and it's a new surgeon that's spending more time and Naruto starts thinking that he's getting cheated on.
6/15/2017 c10 Whiny Reviewer
they are so cute I love this. Please update UPDATE UPDATE!
6/15/2017 c9 Guest
ONG I JUST WANT SASUKE TO FUCK HIS BRAINS OUT AND LEAVE HIM LIMPING. Also where is Minato?
6/15/2017 c8 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE
2/16/2017 c11 Arw165
I'm torn. You kept me glued to the screen with this light romance and I started wondering what you would be planning to do now, plot-wise. And you asked us for opinion... I like more serious stories, with more drama and the hospital setting is perfect to pull it off. On the other hand I wouldn't want you to spoil the story with possibly unnecessery content (since some seem satisfied with the lighter version). Thought about writing both? :p
1/23/2017 c11 2L YNAL
It's great! I honestly think you should keep the story light only because it's more adorable that way but with whatever decision you make, I'll be happy :)
12/25/2016 c11 4parsimonia
Oh! How I've missed this! (I know you updated in october, but I just saw it)
It was a great chapter and I love how this is progressing.
I would love a little bit of drama to finish off the story with a bang! Sadly I don't know how. But you are such an amazing writer, that I'm sure that whatever you decide to do, it'll be fantastic!

Lots of love and Merry Christmas! x
11/3/2016 c11 Meehalla
Oh god, I misses this story so bad! Doctor Uchiha is one of my big kink in SasuNaru. He is so damn sexy in that role. You already know how I like your writing, its been a long time and I really hope I'll be able to see the end of this story. Personally I would really like a bit of drama. Its always welcomed when our boys come back stronger. I like the idea of a reviewer of Sasuke having to operate Naruto. Danger is always a big help in new growing relationship. I also looooove when Sasuke is all cold and closed, then he is different alone with Naruto. Its fucking cute, Sasuke is a cuddler!
Thank youuuu!
See you soon 3
11/1/2016 c11 eskimo-cones
mwhahah make this plot heavy! add some angst! ya hurt naru's parents or hurt naruto and sasuke has to do surgery on him MWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH! okay okay sorry sorry im evil but i live for the angst! but how u wrote narutos parents was so cute and the restaurant i could see it all haha
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