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10/30/2015 c3 Guest
I live your story, but if rd going to be rated M, you have to add at least something mature. I'm old enough, and I've been dying for a lemon. Please add some fancy fancy lemon juice in there, so the raring will make much more sense.
7/7/2015 c3 2acedreamer29
It's a great story so far. I like where this is going.

Oh, and just a small advice: change the rating from an M to T or K. M isn't the correct rating for this story (unless you're going to add mature content on one of the next chapters). Also, in that way, you have a larger audience to communicate with. Not much people read Rated M stories (unless they're mature enough).
6/25/2015 c3 Guest
Keep writing I gotta know what's gonna happen in the room
4/2/2015 c3 7selaships
It's good! Add more drama and romance, more truth or dare, seven minutes in heaven, spin the bottle. And since its M, you can make it more mature.
3/28/2015 c3 Guest
Moreeseee

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