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6/3/2020 c1 4Issexwithyourcloneincest
Why is he just telling people all that shit? I'm very sure the PJO gods aren't as powerful as you're making them out to be
3/24/2020 c1 3ProfesorGoblitz
...this story is already on my nerves on cliches and the fact he is just spilling every secret out of guy faster than a waterfall
12/24/2017 c4 3Eternity456
Please comeback and update this I really like it so far and is he going to end up with Gaea I kinda of would like to see that happen that would be interesting
1/2/2017 c4 Guest
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10/19/2016 c4 4Monster King
Good story i really liked it just hope that you finish it eventually because I enjoyed it.
5/20/2016 c4 InuLamar
Epic chapter keep it up!
12/22/2015 c1 mcclaine
Yes it makes perfect sense going to great lengths to spill every secret he has, ones that do not concern the roman camp when he hardly knows them yet, and he wanted to be hokage, the strongest ninja in konoha. I get that you characterized him well and from what i've read the story seems well put together but i dont think i can get through it. good luck with the story.
7/5/2015 c1 dpdj1
This story really just pisses me off in all kinds of way.
4/12/2015 c1 koper
Come on, naruto defeated kaguya and she had strenght of primordial God, non of olympian alone should be able to defeat him.

And why would he even decide to help them? He always fight for what he belives is right and all olympians action through history definitly doesnt show them as good
4/3/2015 c1 asingh123
Comparing powers without evidence doesn't produce good stories ... just to make the character lower powered than who he be facing ... it just restrains the stories from going in multi dimension ...

Power level comparison is not at all correct in this story ... I think naruto can easily take on any god alone in his sage mode ... since now kurama is not holding him back ... and easily take all the olympians in his kyubi mode

'She is extremely powerful and can extract all of us from you if she wants'

That's why gods stories are really stupid ... no evidence ... just stupid remarks of power from overly arrogant gods leads to this kind of thinking ... no god could really do half the nonsense they spout...

I can easily say Kaguya is stronger than all primordial combined ... after witnessing the last battle ... and even she can't do this ... since Naruto fought back ... and won

Nobody seem to learn this, God is not equal to some all powerful divine being ...

You are more inclined towards PJ part of this story so I understand ... and if not ... please check the author... fairy tail dragon slayer ... and read the stats of what naruto could do ... and tell me if greek gods could pull half of that off ...
3/27/2015 c4 Guest
liked the chapter
3/26/2015 c4 cned14
are you hinting at a naruto x gaea onsided like thing or is she going to be the second girl
3/28/2015 c1 1Doma Umaru
It's not jinjuriki either. It's actually Jinchuuriki.
3/27/2015 c4 nynrahghost
Interesting. From the sound of this, Naruto will persuade Gaea to resolve things in an alternative way that does involves destroying humanity, but teaches the gods a a lesson. It's also obvious Gaea will have a romantic interest in Naruto.

Gaea x Naruto are rare. I can't remember another story that did that on top of my head. It would be awesome if you can pull off a good story with a Naruto x Gaea pairing. Personally I hope if you do that, that it will a single pairing rather than a harem and that Naruto amicably stops dating Hazel because it doesn't works out (there's no spark or something like that). Harems are an easy way to destroy a story and reduce it to a 'smutfic' or 'porn without a story'.
3/27/2015 c4 Doiman777
NaruGaia!
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