
12/4/2024 c13 Guest
Please update this story whenever you are ready
Please update this story whenever you are ready
5/15/2024 c13 Zara1016
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE x10 SOON PRETTY PLEASE
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE x10 SOON PRETTY PLEASE
3/8/2024 c13 Guest
Wasted chapter plus the source code is still present
Wasted chapter plus the source code is still present
9/8/2023 c3 Me
why is everyone attracted to Ash? He’s like 10 and they’re full grown ADULTS
why is everyone attracted to Ash? He’s like 10 and they’re full grown ADULTS
8/23/2023 c3 Guest
What's up with a gay surge
What's up with a gay surge
7/19/2022 c5 Hellibleri
And I forgot to mention the adults are pedos. Staking claim? To a ten-yead-old?
And I forgot to mention the adults are pedos. Staking claim? To a ten-yead-old?
7/19/2022 c4 Hellibleri
It’s an interesting story. Nothing high quality, not that you’d expect from a fanfiction. It’s cheesy, to say the least. When Lt. Surge was defeated, that dialogue seemed bland. Same with the other characters who faced retribution. A fun story to read but not much else.
It’s an interesting story. Nothing high quality, not that you’d expect from a fanfiction. It’s cheesy, to say the least. When Lt. Surge was defeated, that dialogue seemed bland. Same with the other characters who faced retribution. A fun story to read but not much else.
7/4/2022 c2 Veta Takomoro
Oh man... no Krabby, my beautiful round 1 sweeper. Rest in Peace buddy, you'll forever be one of my favorites.
Oh man... no Krabby, my beautiful round 1 sweeper. Rest in Peace buddy, you'll forever be one of my favorites.
10/6/2021 c6
2AssassinSorcerer
you good author please upload some more dam chapters as I am reading this story for the sixth time literally .

you good author please upload some more dam chapters as I am reading this story for the sixth time literally .
9/13/2021 c1 Guest
Honestamente me desecciona que Ash y Sabrina aquí los pudieras como hermanos y no como pareja ya que hubiera sido más conveniente , eeeh ni pensar que en otras tres historias Sabrina la pusieron como su prima que terrible pensamiento rogamos a arcceus para que nunca sea así porque repito es terrible
Honestamente me desecciona que Ash y Sabrina aquí los pudieras como hermanos y no como pareja ya que hubiera sido más conveniente , eeeh ni pensar que en otras tres historias Sabrina la pusieron como su prima que terrible pensamiento rogamos a arcceus para que nunca sea así porque repito es terrible