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3/28/2021 c14 Flygon17Returns
BlueFlygon17 here. Wow... 5 years huh? Gosh it's been a long time. It's somewhat heartbreaking that after all these years, I remembered this story that I'd loved so much as a teen in high school, and coming back to it now, it's still on hiatus/abandoned. I do hope you come back to writing this story, or at least post an update confirming or denying your continuation of the story. Hope all is well, take care, and see you again some day, Sir Damian.
7/9/2018 c14 5ShadowPhoenix10
Ehm... Is there perhaps an update coming? This is going in a great direction, and it would really suck if this story died. And right after you revealed that Damien and the others have very powerful abilities, too. C’mon! Please just update it!
3/20/2018 c14 LucidAura42
So... Is this fanfic basically abandoned, then? It was going in an interesting direction, I'll say. I'll admit that it was rather sad and slighty annoying that you kept killing off poor Damian's closest friends, but I suppose that's just how the story had to go. But then you hint at these special powers Damian and the others have, and reveal some of the process behind turning people into pokemon... and then you leave it hanging?! for over a year!? Come on man, that's just cruelty. Reader cruelty, I tell ya. If your life has just gotten too much in the way, then at least post a status update, after a year? But honestly, it's a terrible thing to do to start a story and not finish it. Worse than not writing the story at all, in fact. You're the only one who can finish it; you got the plans.

So please? Try and find some time to finish this up? Idk how difficult that would be, but if for whatever reason this is going to be dead for the forseeable future, please, do tell. An explanation isn't required to keep your decency, but it sure wouid be nice. :3
Of course, the best thing wouid be more story, but I'll take what I can get.
11/3/2016 c13 Chris
The "link" just says "dot com /riolu17"
That's the USELESS part of the link...
11/3/2016 c13 BlueFlygon17
Ok...? #Confusled...
So you has a new account? Ok? Gonna try and find it? So confuzzled right nows.
11/3/2016 c13 14Captain Comet
Apparently FF doesn't like the word Patreon (or however you spell that).
11/3/2016 c13 8PsychicEevee0103
I would donate but I'm broke... trust me, I want to help you out as much as possible, but I can't do anything but give moral support.
10/25/2016 c12 BlueFlygon17
Ohhhhh my gosh, the last chapter so far... I can't wait for more! Pleeeeasseeee make more.
10/21/2016 c8 BlueFlygon17
Nuuuuuuuuu! GRENINJA! WWWWWHHHHYYYYY! Ok, I'm officially taking Sceptile off of my top favorites list completely. I hope wild pokemon tear him to shreds and eat him alive. Or that his friends come kill him themselves... Sorry I just can't believe another character is dead...But I know it was all for character development. I know Damian can do it. I know he can.
Aside from that, great action chapter! And thank ARCEUS Bunion is still alive.
Arceus: See, I can do SOME things.
Me: Yeah, but you freakin failed again Arceus! Damian had two friends remember?
Arceus: ohhh yeeeaahhh...YOU SAYING I FAILED HUMAN *refers to prior comment*
Me:Guess who has a ~master ball~...
Arceus: ...
10/20/2016 c3 BlueFlygon
Lol its funny, my name is technically a nice way of putting shiny fly how, since a shiny flygon, while being orangey instead of red, is also more blue-ish, so thus my icon for my gmail and such being a shiny flygon. I would like to know what is Treecko's theory
10/20/2016 c1 GaspingFlygon
Lol sorry my tablet doesn't keep me signed in for these things, so all these weird reviews you are getting are from me, BlueFlygon17. Also, omg Team Alpha!? Omg. And nuuuuu Greninja's and Buniot's were CAPTURED!? Nuuuuuu.! This is gonna be great! And mewtwo?! Omg shocker
10/12/2016 c12 Hylian Hero123
This is awesome! Though I wish Damian could evolve into a Lucario
10/1/2016 c12 PsychicEevee0103
Sorry for the delay, I reread the entire series. There were some bits last chapter or so I forgot, to be honest.
So, one question about the transformation to Pokemon: we know for a fact that Pokemon that don't have final forms that can Mega Evolve are candidates to be shapeshifted into. Mewtwo said Damian's transformation required the Lucarionite. Either Mewtwo was wrong, or there's something more to it.
9/29/2016 c13 iCelebi
Why is this in such a peculiar format?
6/29/2016 c1 Guest
Cool story. :)
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