for If One Never Left10/19/2019 c4 Guest
I hate when authors post a story as complete when it clearly isn't.
I hate when authors post a story as complete when it clearly isn't.
1/20/2018 c3 Guest
Really enjoying your story
Really enjoying your story
12/13/2017 c1 
7era-romance
My complaint so far isn't really a flame per say...more of a small issue: If your going to write in another language... in this case Spanish...please remember to post a translation either immediately after or at the end of the chapter. I don't have access to a translator as I am reading this via the ff app (can copy/paste) so it's a little tedious guessing what exactly the characters are saying or using Google translate.
7era-romanceMy complaint so far isn't really a flame per say...more of a small issue: If your going to write in another language... in this case Spanish...please remember to post a translation either immediately after or at the end of the chapter. I don't have access to a translator as I am reading this via the ff app (can copy/paste) so it's a little tedious guessing what exactly the characters are saying or using Google translate.
9/18/2017 c3 Julianna Baxter
Can you put the translation up. I mean I know I could go online and find it but I'd rather know what you meant then fuck it up and insult someone again.
Can you put the translation up. I mean I know I could go online and find it but I'd rather know what you meant then fuck it up and insult someone again.
7/22/2015 c3 Guest
So far so good. Please do continue to write this story it has been very enjoyable. Ty for sharing your writing talent.
So far so good. Please do continue to write this story it has been very enjoyable. Ty for sharing your writing talent.
6/25/2015 c3 4What's so wrong with me
I'm really enjoying this story and I hope you update soon, I love Bella's character and this story is well written and I can't wait for the next update :D
4What's so wrong with meI'm really enjoying this story and I hope you update soon, I love Bella's character and this story is well written and I can't wait for the next update :D
6/13/2015 c3 1klaroline.makaylasotp
I loved it and can't wait for an update...and would love more of Jackson...I am super curious as to how Bella finds out she's mated to Jasper.
1klaroline.makaylasotpI loved it and can't wait for an update...and would love more of Jackson...I am super curious as to how Bella finds out she's mated to Jasper.
5/29/2015 c3 6slytherinshadowhunter67
Yass I read AN's! By the time I read your last chapter you already had this one up, though, so I thought it was kinda pointless. Anyway, your story is pretty cool, and the OC thing sounds cool too :D But I could do without the spoilers, I don't like those. :)
6slytherinshadowhunter67Yass I read AN's! By the time I read your last chapter you already had this one up, though, so I thought it was kinda pointless. Anyway, your story is pretty cool, and the OC thing sounds cool too :D But I could do without the spoilers, I don't like those. :)