for Reparation5/2/2020 c4 Ari06
Wow!
Wow!
9/4/2018 c4 1991-Old-school-kid
I love the concept of this story! I would love to see how it all started when they first met & what made them elope & whatnot...
I love the concept of this story! I would love to see how it all started when they first met & what made them elope & whatnot...
8/15/2018 c4 Bamcn24
I loved this! Welcome back
I loved this! Welcome back
7/29/2018 c3 
4Chickenlover313
Lol I’m Asian so a spanking is nothing so I feel bad four Nathan, but not as bad as I should feel...
4Chickenlover313Lol I’m Asian so a spanking is nothing so I feel bad four Nathan, but not as bad as I should feel...
7/6/2018 c4 868967484848
This is very good! I like how you wrote it in the present tense (like the book) but kept it in the third person (making it a little different). It was written very realistically, too. Can't wait for more!
868967484848This is very good! I like how you wrote it in the present tense (like the book) but kept it in the third person (making it a little different). It was written very realistically, too. Can't wait for more!
7/5/2018 c2 Charms22
It's sweet, that Tobias is trying to be home to atleast spend aome time with his family
It's sweet, that Tobias is trying to be home to atleast spend aome time with his family
7/4/2018 c4 8Savanah Rose
That was an enjoyable look at their family. I hope Tris's parents see the picture as an olive branch and grab it. They have already missed too much time with their grandkids!
It's nice to have you back. I hope you have more to come!
8Savanah RoseThat was an enjoyable look at their family. I hope Tris's parents see the picture as an olive branch and grab it. They have already missed too much time with their grandkids!
It's nice to have you back. I hope you have more to come!
7/4/2018 c4 enj412
I love this chapter. It is so heartwarming to see them
so happy as a family. I have missed your writing. Welcome back.
I love this chapter. It is so heartwarming to see them
so happy as a family. I have missed your writing. Welcome back.