6/4/2017 c8 Cartoon-cass
Habehqnrgveyehevdv I can't describe how amazing this is! I really can't say much more, I just love everything about this fic, the writing, characters and just the ideas. Keep up the great work!
Habehqnrgveyehevdv I can't describe how amazing this is! I really can't say much more, I just love everything about this fic, the writing, characters and just the ideas. Keep up the great work!
6/3/2017 c8 Guest
! So good! Lots of awesome character development, I really wanna see more of this!
! So good! Lots of awesome character development, I really wanna see more of this!
3/25/2017 c7 ScarletRoofs
I love how Tsuna inherited his power from both sides of his ancestry. Does that make him an Earthling or just carry the blood of one? You've focused a lot on the characters development and I absolutely love that. Gives the reader the chance to feel closer to the characters. Like living through their life along with them. It's the little things too that develop a person and that's depicted very well here. Good job and I hope you do continue this story. I'm looking forward to how you change things here. And how Tsuna will be developing through the years.
I love how Tsuna inherited his power from both sides of his ancestry. Does that make him an Earthling or just carry the blood of one? You've focused a lot on the characters development and I absolutely love that. Gives the reader the chance to feel closer to the characters. Like living through their life along with them. It's the little things too that develop a person and that's depicted very well here. Good job and I hope you do continue this story. I'm looking forward to how you change things here. And how Tsuna will be developing through the years.
10/26/2016 c7 9GNY-002 Gundam Sadalsuud
hmm i really like this story..the way you write things i suppose (?) i kinda like it.. also the way you humanize nana not just smiling all the time..also poor tsuna.. update soon..
hmm i really like this story..the way you write things i suppose (?) i kinda like it.. also the way you humanize nana not just smiling all the time..also poor tsuna.. update soon..
8/22/2016 c7 SB01
This is fantastic! I love the character development, the details, the pace! This story really gives a solid foundation and builds it up. I'm having lots of fun reading; Thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to the next update in eager anticipation.
This is fantastic! I love the character development, the details, the pace! This story really gives a solid foundation and builds it up. I'm having lots of fun reading; Thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to the next update in eager anticipation.
8/12/2016 c7 3Enica
Niiiiiiccceeeeee. Seriously loved it. I absolutely adore Tsuna and Takeshi's interactions and cant wait to see what will happen now that Tsuna has acquired completely his flames! I mean I'm guessing that you'll go down the flame bonds/harmonization route seeing as they feel smth 'different' about each other so Takeshi should feel it right?
Ok, enough about them. God I'm such a sucker for the Guardian/Sky interactions and flame-powered-behaviors... XD I also loved Tsuna's strength (both of will and in general) and train(s) of thought. Also2, you might just be the first person I've seen to portray Iemitsu's actions in such a favorable way without making him ooc!
Oh well, basically great job and pls update soon! Enica out! ;P
Niiiiiiccceeeeee. Seriously loved it. I absolutely adore Tsuna and Takeshi's interactions and cant wait to see what will happen now that Tsuna has acquired completely his flames! I mean I'm guessing that you'll go down the flame bonds/harmonization route seeing as they feel smth 'different' about each other so Takeshi should feel it right?
Ok, enough about them. God I'm such a sucker for the Guardian/Sky interactions and flame-powered-behaviors... XD I also loved Tsuna's strength (both of will and in general) and train(s) of thought. Also2, you might just be the first person I've seen to portray Iemitsu's actions in such a favorable way without making him ooc!
Oh well, basically great job and pls update soon! Enica out! ;P
6/29/2016 c4 Guest
Nana's dad saved Xanxus and his mother, possibly? Also Kyoko being the result of an affair is a pretty interesting take. I like it, well done.
Nana's dad saved Xanxus and his mother, possibly? Also Kyoko being the result of an affair is a pretty interesting take. I like it, well done.
6/28/2016 c7 6Nakama.27
I love ittttttt :3
Poor Tsuna... it's not easy to cope with that sort of thing, and it shows how he really struggles. I just wanna hug him and say it's okay, that it was for your mother... And Takeshi thinks he's not a good enough of a friend? I wanna squeal...! It's so cuuute
I love ittttttt :3
Poor Tsuna... it's not easy to cope with that sort of thing, and it shows how he really struggles. I just wanna hug him and say it's okay, that it was for your mother... And Takeshi thinks he's not a good enough of a friend? I wanna squeal...! It's so cuuute
6/27/2016 c7 2bonewishes
oh! i don't know how i bypassed this fic before it's really good! i've read a few "tsuna doesn't get his flames sealed" fics in my time and this is probably one of the best ones i've read. i especially like all the thought you put into his parents' backstories which really helps things makes more sense in the context of canon. i'm glad that you depict iemitsu as a husband that really loves his family and tries his best, since most stories are done from tsuna's pov and as such, the view on his dad is incredibly biased. it is definitely a nice change of pace.
so far i really like where everything is going and tsuna is having very realistic reactions to things for someone his age but you're still able to tell that his hyper intuition does advance him more, but he isn't too advanced. i'm interested to see just how much he'll change once he's canon age or whenever they start his training to become vongola demico.
also, i'm very excited to see how his and takeshi's relationship advances and if takeshi will somehow get wrapped up in tsuna's trials of trying to keep him and his mother alive. it's all very exciting! i can't wait to see your take on the other characters!
thank you so much for writing and sharing this!
oh! i don't know how i bypassed this fic before it's really good! i've read a few "tsuna doesn't get his flames sealed" fics in my time and this is probably one of the best ones i've read. i especially like all the thought you put into his parents' backstories which really helps things makes more sense in the context of canon. i'm glad that you depict iemitsu as a husband that really loves his family and tries his best, since most stories are done from tsuna's pov and as such, the view on his dad is incredibly biased. it is definitely a nice change of pace.
so far i really like where everything is going and tsuna is having very realistic reactions to things for someone his age but you're still able to tell that his hyper intuition does advance him more, but he isn't too advanced. i'm interested to see just how much he'll change once he's canon age or whenever they start his training to become vongola demico.
also, i'm very excited to see how his and takeshi's relationship advances and if takeshi will somehow get wrapped up in tsuna's trials of trying to keep him and his mother alive. it's all very exciting! i can't wait to see your take on the other characters!
thank you so much for writing and sharing this!
6/27/2016 c7 Apfu205Hf
Really loved it, especially everyone's thoughts and POV.
A really creative and wonderful story that I would take the time of day to read again and again any day.
Really loved it, especially everyone's thoughts and POV.
A really creative and wonderful story that I would take the time of day to read again and again any day.
6/27/2016 c7 Guest
What a amazing story, I was pratically sitting at the end of my seat! This story really brought me in to read more until I was all caught up!
This is a really good story with a solid plot, i can't wait to read more!
What a amazing story, I was pratically sitting at the end of my seat! This story really brought me in to read more until I was all caught up!
This is a really good story with a solid plot, i can't wait to read more!
6/27/2016 c7 63general zargon
Hm, this is shaping up to be an unusual and interesting Tsuna-isn't-sealed fic. :) I look forward to seeing where you're going with this. Is Tsuna going to meet his Guardians earlier? Or just be more awesome by the time Reborn shows up? :) I wish you the best of luck on your writing!
Hm, this is shaping up to be an unusual and interesting Tsuna-isn't-sealed fic. :) I look forward to seeing where you're going with this. Is Tsuna going to meet his Guardians earlier? Or just be more awesome by the time Reborn shows up? :) I wish you the best of luck on your writing!
6/27/2016 c7 jayfeather63
I loved the chapter. Poor Tsuna though. I can't wait to read how this fic unfolds. :)
I loved the chapter. Poor Tsuna though. I can't wait to read how this fic unfolds. :)
2/1/2016 c6 1w- easy enough
Wow, what a great story! I love seeing all of the other POV. And Nana and Iemitsu's meeting.
Wow, what a great story! I love seeing all of the other POV. And Nana and Iemitsu's meeting.