for Omniscience11/20/2015 c6 
1Cassius Moriarty
Can I just say that for your very first fanfiction this is some fantastic shit? Like in the shameful amount of years I've spent reading fanfiction(fuck in the entirety of my life spent reading period) this is one of the best. You've genuinely revamped my love for this fandom and I find that I violently accept your headcanons and unofficially vote them into canon(hey with the parallel universe thing and the mare rings it really is). Either way I hope you don't give up on this and if you write anything else, fanfiction or original, let me know because you've got a lot of potential for greatness. Your writing style is the right kind of engaging plus you give so much depth to the characters and the fucking way you portray kids is on /fleek/. Some of the mannerisms Tsuna and what we saw of Takeshi remind me of the various children I've taken care of. Kids really know how to get to the heart of things. Anyway like I said earlier keep up the damn good work and I can't thank you enough for deciding to post your story on here. Good luck with school, you've just reminde me I need to stop putting off my conditioning exercises.
1Cassius MoriartyCan I just say that for your very first fanfiction this is some fantastic shit? Like in the shameful amount of years I've spent reading fanfiction(fuck in the entirety of my life spent reading period) this is one of the best. You've genuinely revamped my love for this fandom and I find that I violently accept your headcanons and unofficially vote them into canon(hey with the parallel universe thing and the mare rings it really is). Either way I hope you don't give up on this and if you write anything else, fanfiction or original, let me know because you've got a lot of potential for greatness. Your writing style is the right kind of engaging plus you give so much depth to the characters and the fucking way you portray kids is on /fleek/. Some of the mannerisms Tsuna and what we saw of Takeshi remind me of the various children I've taken care of. Kids really know how to get to the heart of things. Anyway like I said earlier keep up the damn good work and I can't thank you enough for deciding to post your story on here. Good luck with school, you've just reminde me I need to stop putting off my conditioning exercises.
7/1/2015 c6 8Natsuyuuki
unique flames indeed. Tsuna's Giotto and Sapphira descendant after all :3
well then , just take your time and Good Luck!
8Natsuyuukiunique flames indeed. Tsuna's Giotto and Sapphira descendant after all :3
well then , just take your time and Good Luck!
6/30/2015 c6 2history
I continue to love your story!
Poor Tsuna... And i really disliked the woman who tried to kill Tsuna...
2historyI continue to love your story!
Poor Tsuna... And i really disliked the woman who tried to kill Tsuna...
6/30/2015 c6 Not-Gonna-Update
Tsuna cut his stalker with a palette knife. I am impressed! Those things are pretty blunt. And Tsuna has such strong Sky flames! He's a cute (and brave) chibi.
The last scene made me want to squeal. Giotto and Tsu-chan are pretty similar, eh?
This is a beautiful chapter. Thanks for updating! :)
Tsuna cut his stalker with a palette knife. I am impressed! Those things are pretty blunt. And Tsuna has such strong Sky flames! He's a cute (and brave) chibi.
The last scene made me want to squeal. Giotto and Tsu-chan are pretty similar, eh?
This is a beautiful chapter. Thanks for updating! :)
6/20/2015 c5 MashiroAzuki
I like how Yamamoto is so mature at such a young age. And the fact that he likes Tsuna very much is very comforting for me :) I'm so glad I decided to read this thing to the end. I hope you update soon. I really want to know how Tsuna progresses.
I like how Yamamoto is so mature at such a young age. And the fact that he likes Tsuna very much is very comforting for me :) I'm so glad I decided to read this thing to the end. I hope you update soon. I really want to know how Tsuna progresses.
6/13/2015 c2 MashiroAzuki
Huh...another boring chapter. I hope you're not offended by this but I'm not fond of reading something like her experience in taking care of Tsuna in full detail. It's that boring (of course this is just my opinion and you are entitled to yours as well so you don't have to take this seriously). Of course I'll still read to know what will happen to Tsuna.
Huh...another boring chapter. I hope you're not offended by this but I'm not fond of reading something like her experience in taking care of Tsuna in full detail. It's that boring (of course this is just my opinion and you are entitled to yours as well so you don't have to take this seriously). Of course I'll still read to know what will happen to Tsuna.
6/13/2015 c1 MashiroAzuki
Yeah...pretty much a boring first chapter. But I'l still read it because I want to see what happens.
Yeah...pretty much a boring first chapter. But I'l still read it because I want to see what happens.
5/30/2015 c5 8Natsuyuuki
I love them :v
I prefer to Tsuna have childhood friends instead alone and getting bullied from other child :3
and... would you make scene Tsuna's second friends? well , that's will be Hibari Kyoya who meet Tsuna and Takeshi :3
and... yeah , Hibari like- no, Love something cute like little animals , Like Tsuna :3
and... still wait here and Good Luck!
8NatsuyuukiI love them :v
I prefer to Tsuna have childhood friends instead alone and getting bullied from other child :3
and... would you make scene Tsuna's second friends? well , that's will be Hibari Kyoya who meet Tsuna and Takeshi :3
and... yeah , Hibari like- no, Love something cute like little animals , Like Tsuna :3
and... still wait here and Good Luck!
5/28/2015 c5 6Nakama.27
Awwwwwwwwww I love this chapter so much! I love the interaction with Takeshi and Tsuna, and the last scene made me grin very very widely XD
6Nakama.27Awwwwwwwwww I love this chapter so much! I love the interaction with Takeshi and Tsuna, and the last scene made me grin very very widely XD
5/28/2015 c5 11Hime-chan Natsumi
Me encanta! Me sorprendió ver Yamamoto. Y fue muy interesante, el ir a ver a luna XD Es decir! A media noche! Hahaha, eso es único. Espero pronto el siguiente capítulo!
11Hime-chan NatsumiMe encanta! Me sorprendió ver Yamamoto. Y fue muy interesante, el ir a ver a luna XD Es decir! A media noche! Hahaha, eso es único. Espero pronto el siguiente capítulo!
5/27/2015 c5 Great
The Sky meets the rain. I love it, it was so cute! And little Takeshi wants to learn the way of the sword! Cute. I love that you gave Tsuna a hobby! Looking forward to more!
The Sky meets the rain. I love it, it was so cute! And little Takeshi wants to learn the way of the sword! Cute. I love that you gave Tsuna a hobby! Looking forward to more!
5/27/2015 c5 13Tsukiyomi Sora
ME ENCANTO, DIOS COMO AMO TU FIC, TSUNA ES TAN LINDO, TAKESHI TAMBIEN... ACTUALIZA PRONTO QUIERO LEER MAS
13Tsukiyomi SoraME ENCANTO, DIOS COMO AMO TU FIC, TSUNA ES TAN LINDO, TAKESHI TAMBIEN... ACTUALIZA PRONTO QUIERO LEER MAS