
10/23/2021 c14 tazdad47
It's a shame Broomstick is off on her next Great Adventure, I am sure this story would thrill her. Question. Is this story finished, or do you have plans to follow up on the team's given task to improve the society for everyone. As I would have told any of my creative writing students, a darn good start to a possible epic finish. Thanks for offering a tribute to one of my favorite fan fiction authors. tazdad47
It's a shame Broomstick is off on her next Great Adventure, I am sure this story would thrill her. Question. Is this story finished, or do you have plans to follow up on the team's given task to improve the society for everyone. As I would have told any of my creative writing students, a darn good start to a possible epic finish. Thanks for offering a tribute to one of my favorite fan fiction authors. tazdad47
4/3/2021 c14 mumphie
I dearly would love for you to find the time (and mojo) to complete this tale. I think it is nearly there!
I dearly would love for you to find the time (and mojo) to complete this tale. I think it is nearly there!
4/1/2021 c11 shadewolfedrt
Broomstick Flyer would have loved this. It uses alot of the same ideas that they used just a bit diffrently.
Broomstick Flyer would have loved this. It uses alot of the same ideas that they used just a bit diffrently.
10/14/2019 c6 Guest
good thing the wesleys will not be under control by that fag and harry will be with ginny by soul bond in my story
good thing the wesleys will not be under control by that fag and harry will be with ginny by soul bond in my story
10/14/2019 c4 Guest
good thing in my story that faggot will never killed lily and james and tom will fail too all of faggotdore secerts including toms dark secert will be known
good thing in my story that faggot will never killed lily and james and tom will fail too all of faggotdore secerts including toms dark secert will be known
10/14/2019 c1 Guest
too bad unlike her you can't even finish it or many of your stories I'm glad their's still teddylonglong unlike others both teddylonglong and broomstickflyer care about their stories and make sure it was updated alot
too bad unlike her you can't even finish it or many of your stories I'm glad their's still teddylonglong unlike others both teddylonglong and broomstickflyer care about their stories and make sure it was updated alot
2/1/2018 c14 Rae
update please!
update please!
10/6/2017 c11 ruth hammond
That was one extremely good chapter, especially the last bit. Creative and still following the gist of the story line.
On to the next chapter...
That was one extremely good chapter, especially the last bit. Creative and still following the gist of the story line.
On to the next chapter...
9/19/2017 c14 MeinGimli
How about finishing this Story.
Neither Broomstickflyer nor the Story deserve it to be abandoned
How about finishing this Story.
Neither Broomstickflyer nor the Story deserve it to be abandoned
8/22/2017 c14 ruth hammond
I hope this is soon finished...Looking forward to the end of this story...
Thank you to Vegasman59... hope there are more of this kind and some of his/her own...
I hope this is soon finished...Looking forward to the end of this story...
Thank you to Vegasman59... hope there are more of this kind and some of his/her own...