
10/20/2016 c2
1Asme
Please continue! I really liked the idea of what you wrote and there's not nearly enough of it. Maybe you should get a beta reader though because you had quite a few spelling mistakes

Please continue! I really liked the idea of what you wrote and there's not nearly enough of it. Maybe you should get a beta reader though because you had quite a few spelling mistakes
9/12/2015 c2 SparrowBlack
Cool! Really Amazing, please,please,posaderas continue soon!
Cool! Really Amazing, please,please,posaderas continue soon!
5/22/2015 c2 Hyruliyangamer23
this is getting interesting hehehe. I cant wait for the next update to come out when it does.
this is getting interesting hehehe. I cant wait for the next update to come out when it does.
3/31/2015 c1 ReireiJester
Love the summary/idea, looking forward to the next chapter,
although longer chapters would be nice "
hisogon 3
Love the summary/idea, looking forward to the next chapter,
although longer chapters would be nice "
hisogon 3
3/31/2015 c1
28sherry dark jewel
kyaaa.. I Really love this pair.. I love it!
So.. Keep
on writing ,please..

kyaaa.. I Really love this pair.. I love it!
So.. Keep
on writing ,please..