for A Star Among Audacity12/11/2024 c1 Kalea2024
I really love this story! It's one of the best I have read here. Great writing, authentic characters. More of this, would be great! And let them kiss please!
I really love this story! It's one of the best I have read here. Great writing, authentic characters. More of this, would be great! And let them kiss please!
10/30/2024 c3 spookyfreakss
why is it that the best stories i have read are not completed?...noooooo.. but anyways, i really love how you have piece the scenes together, sometimes patching up those scenes that really needed some love. i also love the flow. of their conversations, you really captured the characters well. this is such amazing work,. it would be awesome to see more. to read more of this
why is it that the best stories i have read are not completed?...noooooo.. but anyways, i really love how you have piece the scenes together, sometimes patching up those scenes that really needed some love. i also love the flow. of their conversations, you really captured the characters well. this is such amazing work,. it would be awesome to see more. to read more of this
10/30/2024 c1 spookyfreakss
WOW! you should have been the one to have written the script. for their side of the story! they should definitely use this for the movie instead. like wow. this is so good, this what should have happened! this is sooo beautiful. seriously! thank you! this should have been the script for the movie! double thumbs up! you have filed up the missing parts they left out in the movies, and covered it so beautifully
WOW! you should have been the one to have written the script. for their side of the story! they should definitely use this for the movie instead. like wow. this is so good, this what should have happened! this is sooo beautiful. seriously! thank you! this should have been the script for the movie! double thumbs up! you have filed up the missing parts they left out in the movies, and covered it so beautifully
10/9/2020 c2 FantasticallyTragical
tauriel, man, she makes me feel things. she's just so... idk... like, she's wise and foolish and ancient and young and just so many contradictions as a character that she just... idk... I love her an I love love love how you've written her
tauriel, man, she makes me feel things. she's just so... idk... like, she's wise and foolish and ancient and young and just so many contradictions as a character that she just... idk... I love her an I love love love how you've written her
10/9/2020 c1 FantasticallyTragical
this was so good!
tho kili and tauriel definitely could have kissed at least twice there. and I love how you extended their chat in mirkwood!
I love how you kept Fili alive, too. fili stans unite, tbh.
this was so good!
tho kili and tauriel definitely could have kissed at least twice there. and I love how you extended their chat in mirkwood!
I love how you kept Fili alive, too. fili stans unite, tbh.
6/3/2020 c3 
277kstar
Don't know if you are done writing or not. Would love to see more.
Whether it is from the books or the movie, I do love the brothers. Would love to see where you intended to go with this. I do understand about time getting away.
277kstarDon't know if you are done writing or not. Would love to see more.
Whether it is from the books or the movie, I do love the brothers. Would love to see where you intended to go with this. I do understand about time getting away.
2/12/2018 c3 Rahj
So, do you plan to update eventually? I feel you are spot on with Kili's and Tauriel's personalities. It's how I would imagine them interacting with each other. Cautious but curious enough to venture forth and always torn between what is expected and what they feel. Great writing! I love your use of words. The prison scene between Kili and Tauriel is my favorite. It's exactly how I feel the scene would have played out. I hope you planning to continue and finish!
So, do you plan to update eventually? I feel you are spot on with Kili's and Tauriel's personalities. It's how I would imagine them interacting with each other. Cautious but curious enough to venture forth and always torn between what is expected and what they feel. Great writing! I love your use of words. The prison scene between Kili and Tauriel is my favorite. It's exactly how I feel the scene would have played out. I hope you planning to continue and finish!
10/5/2017 c1 Rahj
This is such a good chapter. Your interpretation of the dungeon scene is my favorite. And you really are spot on with the character's personalities. Excellent writing!
This is such a good chapter. Your interpretation of the dungeon scene is my favorite. And you really are spot on with the character's personalities. Excellent writing!
8/23/2017 c3 Rahj
So... You have made some changes. All good I might add. And if I recall correctly, there were more chapters. Looking forward to more!
So... You have made some changes. All good I might add. And if I recall correctly, there were more chapters. Looking forward to more!
2/26/2017 c1 Foxy redhead
I am completely in love with this story! I did notice that sometimes you used "goblin" when i thought you might have meant "orc", for example, Bolg is an Orc, not a Goblin. But other than that, i found your writing phenomenal!
I am completely in love with this story! I did notice that sometimes you used "goblin" when i thought you might have meant "orc", for example, Bolg is an Orc, not a Goblin. But other than that, i found your writing phenomenal!
2/11/2017 c3 5Celebrisilweth
A gamut of feelings here running from fear to pain and longing...love and regret. It will be interesting to see how much everything changes them.
5CelebrisilwethA gamut of feelings here running from fear to pain and longing...love and regret. It will be interesting to see how much everything changes them.
2/5/2017 c2 Jo
This is good - cant wait to see where you take this.
This is good - cant wait to see where you take this.
1/26/2017 c1 helciakuras
Absolutely loved reading this chapter- I reviewed the second first because I simply could not stop in between to review. I really loved how you took the scenes from the film and expanded on them; the extension of Kili and Tauriel in the halls of the Elevn King were just exceptional. Thank you.
Absolutely loved reading this chapter- I reviewed the second first because I simply could not stop in between to review. I really loved how you took the scenes from the film and expanded on them; the extension of Kili and Tauriel in the halls of the Elevn King were just exceptional. Thank you.