for Brothers in Arms5/4/2022 c17 Guest
I cannot believe you had an ODST give a Spartan call code to a squad of Spartans…
Besides that, great as always
I cannot believe you had an ODST give a Spartan call code to a squad of Spartans…
Besides that, great as always
4/30/2022 c8 Guest
Gotta love that pelican pilot humor
Gotta love that pelican pilot humor
4/30/2022 c3 Guest
Wish I could get into my account.
Anyways. Great concept. I love a good ODST story.
Only a couple small things for future reference. No Gunny would call their superior officer anything but Sir.
In that same vein, no marine/soldier/sailor/etc. would call their noncom anything but a variation of their rank. In this case, Gunny.
But still. An amazing story. Sooo much fun to read!
Next chapter!
Wish I could get into my account.
Anyways. Great concept. I love a good ODST story.
Only a couple small things for future reference. No Gunny would call their superior officer anything but Sir.
In that same vein, no marine/soldier/sailor/etc. would call their noncom anything but a variation of their rank. In this case, Gunny.
But still. An amazing story. Sooo much fun to read!
Next chapter!
7/1/2017 c12 a very lazy guy
hacksaw ridge?
hacksaw ridge?
3/21/2017 c27 Harry
well... I fond this story a coupla days back and haven't sped reading it. it was utterly gripping. apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes it was damn near perfect. well done, I loved reading it and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work the future
well... I fond this story a coupla days back and haven't sped reading it. it was utterly gripping. apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes it was damn near perfect. well done, I loved reading it and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work the future
9/23/2016 c28 cannonfodder43
Well I have now finished reading this story... IRL really kept me from doing so for quite a while.
I am going to be honest here; it was not a bad story but not spectacular either in any aspects. At times I had a hard time reading this but your effort and determination in finishing this story is worthy of respect. *Tips hat*
As promised I will gradually go through this, spell check and offer advice but only that. I am short on time.
cannonfodder43
Well I have now finished reading this story... IRL really kept me from doing so for quite a while.
I am going to be honest here; it was not a bad story but not spectacular either in any aspects. At times I had a hard time reading this but your effort and determination in finishing this story is worthy of respect. *Tips hat*
As promised I will gradually go through this, spell check and offer advice but only that. I am short on time.
cannonfodder43
9/20/2016 c24 cannonfodder43
Alright I call hacks; no monitor I have encountered really has been this helpful and easy to persuade.
Alright I call hacks; no monitor I have encountered really has been this helpful and easy to persuade.
9/13/2016 c18 cannonfodder43
Those Team Fortress Two Heavy references... *shakes head in both amusement and disappointment*
Those Team Fortress Two Heavy references... *shakes head in both amusement and disappointment*
9/8/2016 c15 cannonfodder43
Umm... inter-service rivalry aside I think that shooting a pistol next to someones head for little reason, in a populated base... is going to get you in serious trouble.
Umm... inter-service rivalry aside I think that shooting a pistol next to someones head for little reason, in a populated base... is going to get you in serious trouble.
8/2/2016 c14 cannonfodder43
Odd that they did not get to knowing each other before going into battle. Oh well, we learned about them now.
Odd that they did not get to knowing each other before going into battle. Oh well, we learned about them now.
122/8/2016 c13 cannonfodder43
Well things just escalated quickly for everyone involved. At least Carnage is alright.
Well things just escalated quickly for everyone involved. At least Carnage is alright.
2/7/2016 c26 Supreme Commander
awesome chapter, yeah the Spartans learn about the last stand of the 300 their first day of BOOT from the AI Deja. looking forward to the next chapter. this story has been very interesting, Jack Dimitri, Anders and all the rest are awesome and even William is pretty cool too.
awesome chapter, yeah the Spartans learn about the last stand of the 300 their first day of BOOT from the AI Deja. looking forward to the next chapter. this story has been very interesting, Jack Dimitri, Anders and all the rest are awesome and even William is pretty cool too.
2/4/2016 c12 cannonfodder43
A fine albeit short chapter but not that it can be helped. That MAC round better be toned down in power because something like that fired at such velocities would be a planetary extinction worthy event if done improperly.
A fine albeit short chapter but not that it can be helped. That MAC round better be toned down in power because something like that fired at such velocities would be a planetary extinction worthy event if done improperly.