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6/23/2016 c5 TheMidnightDJ
This is getting intriguing! I love how you didn't make them all stuck up royals. They're awesome how you made them blend, and as usual, you have all my favorite shippings! I can't wait for next chapter!
This is getting intriguing! I love how you didn't make them all stuck up royals. They're awesome how you made them blend, and as usual, you have all my favorite shippings! I can't wait for next chapter!
4/4/2016 c5 Foreveshine
This is getting interesting, I wonder what's in store for Serena...I'm guessing a torture device? If it is, man, that's cruel :( Calem better snap out of it.
And now we know that there is an organization. Hmmmmm, lemme guess, there's gonna be a love triangle between May, Drew, and Steven? Just a guess but if it happens, called it ;)
This is getting interesting, I wonder what's in store for Serena...I'm guessing a torture device? If it is, man, that's cruel :( Calem better snap out of it.
And now we know that there is an organization. Hmmmmm, lemme guess, there's gonna be a love triangle between May, Drew, and Steven? Just a guess but if it happens, called it ;)
4/2/2016 c5 Suzus
OHHHH! SO THAT'S WHERE THEY ARE!
I never expected May and Drew to meet up with Steven in Lemuria. (Gotta love the names of the regions.)
I hope this will be continued! I'm really curious about the whole red eyes issue!
OHHHH! SO THAT'S WHERE THEY ARE!
I never expected May and Drew to meet up with Steven in Lemuria. (Gotta love the names of the regions.)
I hope this will be continued! I'm really curious about the whole red eyes issue!
4/2/2016 c5 
4Pokegirlsil
WOW THIS STORY IS MY Update a little more often Other that you're doing a GOOD JOB With this story! :D!
4PokegirlsilWOW THIS STORY IS MY Update a little more often Other that you're doing a GOOD JOB With this story! :D!
4/2/2016 c5 77QUEENSPELLER67
White. Huh. I was expecting Zinnia, but that was a nice twist. That would make sense that the boy was Black. AgencyShipping, I think it's called? I wonder if Prince Steven is Steven Stone. Nice, giving Drew a Sceptile. I was thinking that Lemuria was the Normal region. Yes, I'd like to see this continued. I was wondering if you'd still use Jaime [I will resend you his details if you need me to] as the prince of Crematoria. I liked this chapter. Kind of eerie, but I liked it.
Eagle out.
77QUEENSPELLER67White. Huh. I was expecting Zinnia, but that was a nice twist. That would make sense that the boy was Black. AgencyShipping, I think it's called? I wonder if Prince Steven is Steven Stone. Nice, giving Drew a Sceptile. I was thinking that Lemuria was the Normal region. Yes, I'd like to see this continued. I was wondering if you'd still use Jaime [I will resend you his details if you need me to] as the prince of Crematoria. I liked this chapter. Kind of eerie, but I liked it.
Eagle out.
4/2/2016 c5 1sapphire53
Nice to have a new chapter, I am glad your putting even more characters in your chapter like Black and White and Steven. I wonder just what is controlling the dragon people? I had a guess last chapter but you know how long thats been. Poor Serena, I really hope that Calem at least gets back some of his sense to show her that it wasn't all in vain. Either way its a great chapter, glad you uploaded and I hope you upload soon! But take your time.
1sapphire53Nice to have a new chapter, I am glad your putting even more characters in your chapter like Black and White and Steven. I wonder just what is controlling the dragon people? I had a guess last chapter but you know how long thats been. Poor Serena, I really hope that Calem at least gets back some of his sense to show her that it wasn't all in vain. Either way its a great chapter, glad you uploaded and I hope you upload soon! But take your time.
4/2/2016 c5 Just Another Kid
Man, it's been a WHILE since I've seen anything from this story. Heck I didn't even recognize the title anymore I just recognized the cover pic and you. Anyway, the chapter. First off, Poor Serena! Jeez, first she get treated like trash by Calem then gets torture!? Yeah, you're going all out on them huh? Heck, just Black and White are unsettling to hear they're so off from how they're normally portrayed and so much more cruel. Granted it's probably whatever is turning the people of Dragotora evil but still. (Random Note: Tbh thinking about it a tad bit I kinda see White more of someone Flarespyre since she did have a Tepig when we were introduced to her in the manga and not to mention as far as I know she doesn't even have a dragon type (Black's fine since he got Reshiram) so... Yeah.) Then there's the whole resistance with Steven and Gary and Lemuria (which is probably where Norman and Max went off to when they left May and her mom) Wow, I have to say while it's just two P.O.V.s for this chapter I like the development it leaves a strong impact on the characters themselves. Keep it up! I'm not sure when you'll give us another chapter but I'm looking forward to it!
P.S. Quick thing that you might want to note it might be nice if you would note the type of the kingdoms in a small chart. I know that some are obvious but to save us from some confusion plus it can help us jog our memories on where's where and what's what just in case you go on another hiatus.
Man, it's been a WHILE since I've seen anything from this story. Heck I didn't even recognize the title anymore I just recognized the cover pic and you. Anyway, the chapter. First off, Poor Serena! Jeez, first she get treated like trash by Calem then gets torture!? Yeah, you're going all out on them huh? Heck, just Black and White are unsettling to hear they're so off from how they're normally portrayed and so much more cruel. Granted it's probably whatever is turning the people of Dragotora evil but still. (Random Note: Tbh thinking about it a tad bit I kinda see White more of someone Flarespyre since she did have a Tepig when we were introduced to her in the manga and not to mention as far as I know she doesn't even have a dragon type (Black's fine since he got Reshiram) so... Yeah.) Then there's the whole resistance with Steven and Gary and Lemuria (which is probably where Norman and Max went off to when they left May and her mom) Wow, I have to say while it's just two P.O.V.s for this chapter I like the development it leaves a strong impact on the characters themselves. Keep it up! I'm not sure when you'll give us another chapter but I'm looking forward to it!
P.S. Quick thing that you might want to note it might be nice if you would note the type of the kingdoms in a small chart. I know that some are obvious but to save us from some confusion plus it can help us jog our memories on where's where and what's what just in case you go on another hiatus.
4/2/2016 c5 10RemiScarlet58
Hey, welcome back! Great chapter as always, despite the horrific fact that Calem's gone nuts D:
10RemiScarlet58Hey, welcome back! Great chapter as always, despite the horrific fact that Calem's gone nuts D:
4/2/2016 c5 3schoolmouse33
Wow, it has been awhile since you've updated, but I supposed it couldn't be helped. Great chapter as always and poor Serena, wonder if Calem is gonna snap out of it?
3schoolmouse33Wow, it has been awhile since you've updated, but I supposed it couldn't be helped. Great chapter as always and poor Serena, wonder if Calem is gonna snap out of it?
8/12/2015 c4 InfamousChub
Long ago, the 18 nations lived in harmony. Then everything changed when the dragon nation attacked. Only the Pokéavatar, master of all 18 elements could stop them but when the world needed him most, he vanished. 100 years passed and my brother and I discovered the new Pokéavatar, a normal type named Oong. And although his Tackle attack is great, he has a lot to learn before he's ready to save anyone. But I believe Oong can save the world...
All joking aside, I really like this fic. I love fantasy stories, especially with characters who can wield a sword or bow or whatever, makes them feel like they have... POWER!
I also like the story as of yet, interesting ideas and a nice setting. Thing to work on is adding random details, that's what gives a story a larger word count without the plot becoming too tedious. It's like having a skeleton(plot line), adding flesh to it(characters and such), dressing it up(adding sub plots and character development) and then accessorising it(small details that play on the senses of the reader to enhance the experience and imprint into the emotions, making the story, by now a work of art, into something to be remembered forever!
Long ago, the 18 nations lived in harmony. Then everything changed when the dragon nation attacked. Only the Pokéavatar, master of all 18 elements could stop them but when the world needed him most, he vanished. 100 years passed and my brother and I discovered the new Pokéavatar, a normal type named Oong. And although his Tackle attack is great, he has a lot to learn before he's ready to save anyone. But I believe Oong can save the world...
All joking aside, I really like this fic. I love fantasy stories, especially with characters who can wield a sword or bow or whatever, makes them feel like they have... POWER!
I also like the story as of yet, interesting ideas and a nice setting. Thing to work on is adding random details, that's what gives a story a larger word count without the plot becoming too tedious. It's like having a skeleton(plot line), adding flesh to it(characters and such), dressing it up(adding sub plots and character development) and then accessorising it(small details that play on the senses of the reader to enhance the experience and imprint into the emotions, making the story, by now a work of art, into something to be remembered forever!
7/10/2015 c4 2EternalWhiteMoon
OH MY GOSH... I really like the story plot and I very excited for the next chapter! I like your writing style. Good Luck! :)
2EternalWhiteMoonOH MY GOSH... I really like the story plot and I very excited for the next chapter! I like your writing style. Good Luck! :)
7/4/2015 c1 Raichflame
Happy 4th of July everyone!
Happy 4th of July everyone!
7/3/2015 c1 1cpu8
Looks great! Keep it going. I really like this intro, it's very strong and informative.
1cpu8Looks great! Keep it going. I really like this intro, it's very strong and informative.
7/2/2015 c4 3schoolmouse33
First of all, amazing chapter as always, I never expect anything less. So Ash is on the healing path while Drew is captured and May hopes to help him by making her his slave as a cover, interesting...very interesting. Can't wait to see what you write out next.
3schoolmouse33First of all, amazing chapter as always, I never expect anything less. So Ash is on the healing path while Drew is captured and May hopes to help him by making her his slave as a cover, interesting...very interesting. Can't wait to see what you write out next.