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49kiarcheo
I wasn't expecting this. Not the trials AND joining the Trigedakru. I like it :)
Also, I really liked how Indra thought about Lexa and what it would mean for her, that she could be with Clarke for one.
Can't wait to read more
49kiarcheoI wasn't expecting this. Not the trials AND joining the Trigedakru. I like it :)
Also, I really liked how Indra thought about Lexa and what it would mean for her, that she could be with Clarke for one.
Can't wait to read more
4/1/2015 c2 12Anavaress
The first chapter was a little boring as we already know what happened to Clarke but I got through it. The second one is much better. It's an interesting plot but especially it's very well writen (even if there are some mistakes here and there). I don't know if "Trigedasleng" is a word used in the show but if you came up with it you really got how that fake language works (same this whith how you wrote tonDC and not Tondc).
I really like that last part : "Echo on her heels" sounds perfect.
12AnavaressThe first chapter was a little boring as we already know what happened to Clarke but I got through it. The second one is much better. It's an interesting plot but especially it's very well writen (even if there are some mistakes here and there). I don't know if "Trigedasleng" is a word used in the show but if you came up with it you really got how that fake language works (same this whith how you wrote tonDC and not Tondc).
I really like that last part : "Echo on her heels" sounds perfect.