
2/8/2023 c16 CrimsonCaliber
I just binged the whole thing in one go, and I must say I am throughly enjoying the ride. Even small details suck me in and leave me eager to discover the answers. The resurrection of qui-gon will surely have interesting effects on both anakin and obi-wan. I look forward to what comes next. Thank you for the experience!
I just binged the whole thing in one go, and I must say I am throughly enjoying the ride. Even small details suck me in and leave me eager to discover the answers. The resurrection of qui-gon will surely have interesting effects on both anakin and obi-wan. I look forward to what comes next. Thank you for the experience!
2/6/2023 c5 Albwin
Why is every oppositional character a caricature of idiocy, incompetence, and malfeasance like some bad Harry Potter fanfiction? Did Harry contaminate Star Wars with his presence and make every 'enemy' conceptually incapable of not acting like some bad children's cartoon villain, that just exist to be a loud idiot and then get wrecked like clockwork? Why do these characters exist if they are simply there to induce shallow negative feelings in the audience yet have no impact on the world whatsoever in any real way? It's just lazy and artificial drama.
Why is every oppositional character a caricature of idiocy, incompetence, and malfeasance like some bad Harry Potter fanfiction? Did Harry contaminate Star Wars with his presence and make every 'enemy' conceptually incapable of not acting like some bad children's cartoon villain, that just exist to be a loud idiot and then get wrecked like clockwork? Why do these characters exist if they are simply there to induce shallow negative feelings in the audience yet have no impact on the world whatsoever in any real way? It's just lazy and artificial drama.
2/2/2023 c16 AlukaXD
Once u can update again, I hope you don't shorten the chapters, idk why but I like longer chapters then short chapters
Once u can update again, I hope you don't shorten the chapters, idk why but I like longer chapters then short chapters
1/27/2023 c16 himejimaDhikigaya
I keep coming back to this story, even knowing I've read it before and even knowing it's incomplete just because I know it's that good. Every time I get to the end I'm devastated.
Still a fantastic story kathryn518, thank you.
I keep coming back to this story, even knowing I've read it before and even knowing it's incomplete just because I know it's that good. Every time I get to the end I'm devastated.
Still a fantastic story kathryn518, thank you.
1/12/2023 c3 DerekB74
Transfiguring a wall to paper, walking through the paper, repairing the paper, and then transfiguring the paper back to wall was one of the most brilliantly simple things that I have read to date. I never thought of it, nor have seen in any other fic. I had to stop and shake myself from that. It's a perfect exit during a distraction.
Transfiguring a wall to paper, walking through the paper, repairing the paper, and then transfiguring the paper back to wall was one of the most brilliantly simple things that I have read to date. I never thought of it, nor have seen in any other fic. I had to stop and shake myself from that. It's a perfect exit during a distraction.
12/30/2022 c16 Sarah Nitschke
i wonder what happened to you dear author i hope your doing well where ever you are now. Its said to see that this fic will probably never be completed. But i've saved it just in case you ever return. Considering its been 5 years i don't think you ever will come back but we readers will hold onto that tiny thing called hope until the day we are either told a fanfiction has been abandoned or said hope it kills us. Hope your doing well :)
i wonder what happened to you dear author i hope your doing well where ever you are now. Its said to see that this fic will probably never be completed. But i've saved it just in case you ever return. Considering its been 5 years i don't think you ever will come back but we readers will hold onto that tiny thing called hope until the day we are either told a fanfiction has been abandoned or said hope it kills us. Hope your doing well :)
12/27/2022 c16 Hopeful
GIVE ME MOAR!
GIVE ME MOAR!
12/20/2022 c5 Regtech
I hoped so dearly for harry to kick secura out, guess not. She has been warned, she seen different feets a couple of times, she seen the ugly side of the order, she has movked the order and yet she is still their dog. Damn is she annoying. Even the forve isnt enough to convince her.
If dooku could turn dark, why not everyone else? Bloody jedi mindset
I hoped so dearly for harry to kick secura out, guess not. She has been warned, she seen different feets a couple of times, she seen the ugly side of the order, she has movked the order and yet she is still their dog. Damn is she annoying. Even the forve isnt enough to convince her.
If dooku could turn dark, why not everyone else? Bloody jedi mindset