for I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For10/5/2024 c10 Soul Sendant
what no spacial expansion charms when you're so liberal with everything else how weird. and this oc harry is seriously just a punk. completely hate this fuckin piece of shit mc for sure. immature beyond belief and bot much else at all.
what no spacial expansion charms when you're so liberal with everything else how weird. and this oc harry is seriously just a punk. completely hate this fuckin piece of shit mc for sure. immature beyond belief and bot much else at all.
10/5/2024 c9 Soul Sendant
there are several lightsaber colors in red just sucks and the purple with black core or black sabers are the best colors. this mc needs a rewrite for sure immature and not a man just weak minded boy. It's sad as older more mature and intelligent people dont act like this yeah its uh very groomy feeling to want an old guy to seem and feel young to fit into the younger crowd like they belong you know seems like harry is the real pedophile in the story. maybe he can grow up, and this mature rating will kind of fit.
there are several lightsaber colors in red just sucks and the purple with black core or black sabers are the best colors. this mc needs a rewrite for sure immature and not a man just weak minded boy. It's sad as older more mature and intelligent people dont act like this yeah its uh very groomy feeling to want an old guy to seem and feel young to fit into the younger crowd like they belong you know seems like harry is the real pedophile in the story. maybe he can grow up, and this mature rating will kind of fit.
10/5/2024 c8 Soul Sendant
immature as fuck rant about colors when red and gold gryffindor colors are the worst of the four houses easily
immature as fuck rant about colors when red and gold gryffindor colors are the worst of the four houses easily
10/5/2024 c8 Soul Sendant
oh harry has fake hatred for slytherin colors when they are his true colors wonder if thats the authors bias
oh harry has fake hatred for slytherin colors when they are his true colors wonder if thats the authors bias
10/5/2024 c7 Soul Sendant
poor neville whores are not worth a fuck that trash needed left on the street
poor neville whores are not worth a fuck that trash needed left on the street
10/5/2024 c7 Soul Sendant
the force is in everything so if the force is magic the zeltron bartender had inherent in her so yeah that dont work
the force is in everything so if the force is magic the zeltron bartender had inherent in her so yeah that dont work
10/5/2024 c6 Soul Sendant
definitely is not accurately listed as a mature novel. im sure more exlplicit whore glorification may be on the way tho but we shall see.
definitely is not accurately listed as a mature novel. im sure more exlplicit whore glorification may be on the way tho but we shall see.
10/5/2024 c6 Soul Sendant
this bit pretending that the jedi and sith are just way behind in magic knowledge is not working, the difference is magic, and the force are two different energies. Basic logic wouldn't let your idea work as the jedi and sith have existed for many thousands of years longer than wand wavers. so no magic and the force are not the same thing, and forcing them together with plot armor doesn't really work out. story isn't that bad a bit of rewriting, and it can shine.
this bit pretending that the jedi and sith are just way behind in magic knowledge is not working, the difference is magic, and the force are two different energies. Basic logic wouldn't let your idea work as the jedi and sith have existed for many thousands of years longer than wand wavers. so no magic and the force are not the same thing, and forcing them together with plot armor doesn't really work out. story isn't that bad a bit of rewriting, and it can shine.
10/5/2024 c5 Soul Sendant
Magic has lots of limits. I'm not sure why this Harry has zero intelligence when magic requires it.
Magic has lots of limits. I'm not sure why this Harry has zero intelligence when magic requires it.
10/5/2024 c5 Soul Sendant
this conversation with ashoka feels like she is an ai bot getting confused over simple questions
this conversation with ashoka feels like she is an ai bot getting confused over simple questions
10/5/2024 c4 Soul Sendant
harry would fully understand meditation if he has any occlumency at all this part about how he dismisses meditation as nothing is highly ignorant and just points to the lacking intelligence and common sense of the mc who is already as immature as possible definitely needs a bit of rewriting
harry would fully understand meditation if he has any occlumency at all this part about how he dismisses meditation as nothing is highly ignorant and just points to the lacking intelligence and common sense of the mc who is already as immature as possible definitely needs a bit of rewriting
10/5/2024 c4 Soul Sendant
if magic and the force were the same space wizards would be everywhere and jedi and sith wouldnt be just glorified telekinetics
if magic and the force were the same space wizards would be everywhere and jedi and sith wouldnt be just glorified telekinetics
10/5/2024 c3 Soul Sendant
oh boy, horrible taste in paint jobs and names. This is like some 13 year old chunni delusions written down. this is definitely not a mature story. And this Harry isn't interesting or funny, just immature like most kids and wannabe adults these days. and seriously what an ugly ship that would be and the name is pretty retarded the gryffindor really? like I said ickle kiddy shit.
oh boy, horrible taste in paint jobs and names. This is like some 13 year old chunni delusions written down. this is definitely not a mature story. And this Harry isn't interesting or funny, just immature like most kids and wannabe adults these days. and seriously what an ugly ship that would be and the name is pretty retarded the gryffindor really? like I said ickle kiddy shit.