
4/3/2015 c1 Opinr
An awesome start I look forward to more.
An awesome start I look forward to more.
4/3/2015 c1 Guest
Good chapter!
Good chapter!
4/3/2015 c1 Guest
That! Was! Awesome! Definitely need more of this
That! Was! Awesome! Definitely need more of this
4/3/2015 c1 IMPERATOR
super)))
super)))
4/2/2015 c1 xD
I like it!
I like it!
4/3/2015 c1
10Castage
Brilliant!
I really like the dialogues, the jokes, the humour, even short action! The bartender will be returning, I hope – more funny interactions, more flirting and more tea.
The interaction between Harry and the Jedi was funny, yet at the same time you managed to show them from different point of view (“It's a truth, from a certain point of view”).
The clone's role in Republic is a nice piece of information/world building.
I'm really looking forward for more.

Brilliant!
I really like the dialogues, the jokes, the humour, even short action! The bartender will be returning, I hope – more funny interactions, more flirting and more tea.
The interaction between Harry and the Jedi was funny, yet at the same time you managed to show them from different point of view (“It's a truth, from a certain point of view”).
The clone's role in Republic is a nice piece of information/world building.
I'm really looking forward for more.
4/3/2015 c1 serialkeller
Great start, although I'm kind of hoping this won't just trail off into nothingness
Great start, although I'm kind of hoping this won't just trail off into nothingness
4/3/2015 c1 Neon1311
The confrontation with the masters was quite funny and the story seems to be very interesting.
I'm not sure if I should wish that your muse hides with that story or get dragged back and tied up by I'm still here.
Anyway great start for a new story and I'm curious how it will continue.
The confrontation with the masters was quite funny and the story seems to be very interesting.
I'm not sure if I should wish that your muse hides with that story or get dragged back and tied up by I'm still here.
Anyway great start for a new story and I'm curious how it will continue.
4/2/2015 c1 RagingTide
Okay...wow. That was a really fantastic first chapter. I really am enjoying this first glimpse of your Harry. He's powerful, (at least I got that impression, definitely experienced) but not an evil overlord, or a spineless wimp; He clearly is confident in his own power, but merely seems weary and uninterested in conflict. Somehow I doubt that's going to work out for him ;)
I've never really gotten into the Clone Wars series, though not because of any fault on it's part. But I did like the few bits of Ahsoka I caught. And I think I'm going to quite enjoy her interactions with Harry. She's clearly a bit naive, and also passionate, and I think will have excellent rapport with Mr. Potter.
A couple questions:
First and most obvious is why and how Harry found his way onto Coruscant, or the Galaxy far far away itself. I'm sure that will be explained later, but I'm an impatient one haha.
I also can't help but wonder what exactly happened with Anakin and Ahsoka when she decided to split. I don't know if you have plans for him in the future, but it's something I was curious about.
Thirdly, the Jedi's reaction to Harry's little disappearing act. I can only think of three options: One, He's a Sith (and I suspect Tre'jin might be pushing for that one;) two, he's a rogue Jedi or some sort: or three, he pulled some trick to escape (Though i think this unlikely, if they felt his healing all over the planet, they surely felt apparition from a few feet away.)
Anyway, great great chapter, I am quite excited to see where you are going to take this!
Okay...wow. That was a really fantastic first chapter. I really am enjoying this first glimpse of your Harry. He's powerful, (at least I got that impression, definitely experienced) but not an evil overlord, or a spineless wimp; He clearly is confident in his own power, but merely seems weary and uninterested in conflict. Somehow I doubt that's going to work out for him ;)
I've never really gotten into the Clone Wars series, though not because of any fault on it's part. But I did like the few bits of Ahsoka I caught. And I think I'm going to quite enjoy her interactions with Harry. She's clearly a bit naive, and also passionate, and I think will have excellent rapport with Mr. Potter.
A couple questions:
First and most obvious is why and how Harry found his way onto Coruscant, or the Galaxy far far away itself. I'm sure that will be explained later, but I'm an impatient one haha.
I also can't help but wonder what exactly happened with Anakin and Ahsoka when she decided to split. I don't know if you have plans for him in the future, but it's something I was curious about.
Thirdly, the Jedi's reaction to Harry's little disappearing act. I can only think of three options: One, He's a Sith (and I suspect Tre'jin might be pushing for that one;) two, he's a rogue Jedi or some sort: or three, he pulled some trick to escape (Though i think this unlikely, if they felt his healing all over the planet, they surely felt apparition from a few feet away.)
Anyway, great great chapter, I am quite excited to see where you are going to take this!
4/2/2015 c1 hojosatoko
Okay, usually I'm too lazy to write reviews, but this is hilarious, so I'm going to do one.
First of all, it's hilarious, like I said earlier. Lively, lovely, and interesting.
There are couple of questions I hope to be resolved later in the history:
1) how did it happen so Harry didn't cast spells earlier on coruscant? If it were to happen earlier, then they should have something like active investigation on that happenings, I think. So it calls for some plot hole :)
2) Since the Jedi order is a commanding body of ongoing war, and there is one, I think Jedi actually can take anybody from the streets legally for investigation. Especially if they are suspicious. Like carrying an armed unconscious body. (doesn't change their overall prickness though).
So, waiting for next chapters, please write more xD
Okay, usually I'm too lazy to write reviews, but this is hilarious, so I'm going to do one.
First of all, it's hilarious, like I said earlier. Lively, lovely, and interesting.
There are couple of questions I hope to be resolved later in the history:
1) how did it happen so Harry didn't cast spells earlier on coruscant? If it were to happen earlier, then they should have something like active investigation on that happenings, I think. So it calls for some plot hole :)
2) Since the Jedi order is a commanding body of ongoing war, and there is one, I think Jedi actually can take anybody from the streets legally for investigation. Especially if they are suspicious. Like carrying an armed unconscious body. (doesn't change their overall prickness though).
So, waiting for next chapters, please write more xD