for I Still Haven't Found What I'm Looking For
24/2/2015 c1 hojosatoko
Okay, usually I'm too lazy to write reviews, but this is hilarious, so I'm going to do one.
First of all, it's hilarious, like I said earlier. Lively, lovely, and interesting.
There are couple of questions I hope to be resolved later in the history:
1) how did it happen so Harry didn't cast spells earlier on coruscant? If it were to happen earlier, then they should have something like active investigation on that happenings, I think. So it calls for some plot hole :)
2) Since the Jedi order is a commanding body of ongoing war, and there is one, I think Jedi actually can take anybody from the streets legally for investigation. Especially if they are suspicious. Like carrying an armed unconscious body. (doesn't change their overall prickness though).
So, waiting for next chapters, please write more xD
Okay, usually I'm too lazy to write reviews, but this is hilarious, so I'm going to do one.
First of all, it's hilarious, like I said earlier. Lively, lovely, and interesting.
There are couple of questions I hope to be resolved later in the history:
1) how did it happen so Harry didn't cast spells earlier on coruscant? If it were to happen earlier, then they should have something like active investigation on that happenings, I think. So it calls for some plot hole :)
2) Since the Jedi order is a commanding body of ongoing war, and there is one, I think Jedi actually can take anybody from the streets legally for investigation. Especially if they are suspicious. Like carrying an armed unconscious body. (doesn't change their overall prickness though).
So, waiting for next chapters, please write more xD
4/2/2015 c1 kiananishirami
Holy hell... O.O! i love it! its crazy! its driving me to insane cackles of laughter! *rofl*
more, please MORE!
Holy hell... O.O! i love it! its crazy! its driving me to insane cackles of laughter! *rofl*
more, please MORE!
4/2/2015 c1 nad destroyer
Yay! Your back with a new story! I was wondering what was going on but figured RL or writers block had you down. I will be reviewing every chapter of this particular story. I've been meaning to do that with your Harry Potter fic but I procrastinate too much.
Sadly this is an area in the Star War's universe in which I am ignorant in some areas. Like Bariss betrayal. Sucks for me. Oh well.
Well holy shit what a great first chapter. Of course I've got so many damn questions now but I'm sure if I just wait for updates they'll be answered. I absolutely love how Harry handled the Jedi morons. Thats rather shocking you have 10 chapters written for this story though. Try to resist posting them one after another though.
Yay! Your back with a new story! I was wondering what was going on but figured RL or writers block had you down. I will be reviewing every chapter of this particular story. I've been meaning to do that with your Harry Potter fic but I procrastinate too much.
Sadly this is an area in the Star War's universe in which I am ignorant in some areas. Like Bariss betrayal. Sucks for me. Oh well.
Well holy shit what a great first chapter. Of course I've got so many damn questions now but I'm sure if I just wait for updates they'll be answered. I absolutely love how Harry handled the Jedi morons. Thats rather shocking you have 10 chapters written for this story though. Try to resist posting them one after another though.