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7/3/2015 c1 6XinconceivableX
Aw this was a great start, and poor Snape! I hope he finds a way to get out soon! He so does not deserve that after all he did :(
6/15/2015 c3 Hermioneforever5
I thought it was really good and unique but please PLEASE write more!
6/15/2015 c3 Serpentoria
Well quite nice fanfic! Keep on continue story, don't make long update that feels abandont story. I'll wait next chappy unpatiently!
Anyway, i feel sad for Snape. He give all his memories to Harry (if u follow canon) and he dies. How could Snape survive the 2nd may great war? Hope u explain it in ff
6/15/2015 c3 Aggy
PLeeeeeasssseee Post more!
and can there be a twist to do with Gryffindor/Slitherin?
Thanks.
xx
6/15/2015 c1 That one guy
Holy hell, this is good, like really good i love it, after Malfoy left Olivanders i was expecting Teddy to say something and the story to be about Harry (old habits die hard) but this was excuse my french, fan-fucking-tastic
6/15/2015 c3 2HolyHeraHazel
So much happened in this chapter...
Albus is a Parseltongue?
6/15/2015 c1 HolyHeraHazel
This could be good - Harry Potter chocolate frog card is new!
4/25/2015 c2 Guest
I'm so excited to see where this goes! x
4/25/2015 c1 Guest
Is the man in azkaban snape?
4/21/2015 c2 Guest
This was a good chapter; what's going on with Snape, I wonder?
Please keep going
4/21/2015 c2 allthewayfromnepal
I was looking for a nice Post -Hogwarts story .So ,naturally I was very much interested in your pretty good in both plot sequence and literature value.I quite liked your method of using Scorpio's point of , good work and I hope that after such a promising start , this story doesn't of luck
4/16/2015 c1 Guest
Well I want you to keep going, because so many stories start but only get a few chapters through and NEXT MINUTE oh look it hasn't been updated for ten years...
PLEASE don't let that happen!
4/4/2015 c1 cold-mushrooms
Scorpius is interesting - i don't know what to make of him. He certainly doesn't seem dark...
This story could be really fantastic: you just have to KEEP GOING!
I have faith in you buddy.
Scorpius not knowing who Harry is is a new idea.
4/3/2015 c1 Armand
This story could and will (please continue!) go places! I look forward to any and all future chapters!
4/3/2015 c1 Guest
Overall, a very good story! I like how you started it from the trip to Diagon Alley, instead of Platform 9 and 3/4 like most people do.
A few words of advice: Once thing that kind of had me confused is when the twins first appeared on the scene. We don't really know much about them, or how they no Scorpius. Are they family friends? Do they know each other from somewhere? You do a good job describing their appearance and their conversation with Scorpius really gives you a look into all three kids' personality, but a little bit of background on how they know each other would be helpful.
Also, is Scorpius' birthday like super late in August? Is that why he's Hogwarts shopping early? Because I always thought kids didn't get their Hogwarts letter until they were eleven... Though I suppose his father could just be taking him early because it's not like he doesn't know what supplies first years need... Sorry, I'm rambling. I'll stop now.
Anyway, overall, a good start! If you ever want/need beta reading, let me know, I can give it a try (though I can't promise I'll be good, considering I haven't done it before). I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Update soon!
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