for Seeing is Believing3/27/2020 c34 
1Yinuo5
Yesssss! Christine can finally see! But be careful Erik! Christine being temporarily blind made me suddenly realize, when she first came to Erik's the only things she's able to see are her nightmares, poor Christine.
I know you say you like reviews, but I was just wondering (I tend to overthink on a lot of things, just not as much as Erik does, but anyways) if you still appreciate reviews that's late. I don't want to you get annoyed with my bombarding your inbox or something like that.(Umm, you may find this absurd, but I am a very nervous person). Also once again I am impressed by how you could write such wonderful stuff.
1Yinuo5Yesssss! Christine can finally see! But be careful Erik! Christine being temporarily blind made me suddenly realize, when she first came to Erik's the only things she's able to see are her nightmares, poor Christine.
I know you say you like reviews, but I was just wondering (I tend to overthink on a lot of things, just not as much as Erik does, but anyways) if you still appreciate reviews that's late. I don't want to you get annoyed with my bombarding your inbox or something like that.(Umm, you may find this absurd, but I am a very nervous person). Also once again I am impressed by how you could write such wonderful stuff.
3/27/2020 c5 Yinuo5
awwwwwwww this is such a sweet chapter, god bless Anna, but I have sinking feeling that something terrible is going to happen
awwwwwwww this is such a sweet chapter, god bless Anna, but I have sinking feeling that something terrible is going to happen
3/18/2020 c1 Badpixie06
Intriguing from the start.
Love it when the first chapter captures me as I know I’m going to enjoy the story.
Intriguing from the start.
Love it when the first chapter captures me as I know I’m going to enjoy the story.
11/21/2019 c50 Guest
Brava! Really enjoyed this one!
Brava! Really enjoyed this one!
8/21/2019 c54 27CharlieBoneFan
That was one of the most amazing and beautiful stories I ever read! I especially loved the Daniel Trouville chapter! This story is definitely tied with another story as my top favorite POTO story as of now.
27CharlieBoneFanThat was one of the most amazing and beautiful stories I ever read! I especially loved the Daniel Trouville chapter! This story is definitely tied with another story as my top favorite POTO story as of now.
8/16/2019 c38 Jonathan
THIS HAS BEEN MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR! Brilliant work with Mr Charles! One thing I was bothered with was the fact that you had to spoon feed the reason why Mr. Charles was acting the way he was; in the middle of the scene no less! It brought an annoying break to the tension you were trying to convey. I can understand that you wish to portray mr. Charles as a distraught father but breaking the immersion of the scene was too much of a cost.
I am sorry to offer criticism without a suggestion on how to improve. :(
THIS HAS BEEN MY FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR! Brilliant work with Mr Charles! One thing I was bothered with was the fact that you had to spoon feed the reason why Mr. Charles was acting the way he was; in the middle of the scene no less! It brought an annoying break to the tension you were trying to convey. I can understand that you wish to portray mr. Charles as a distraught father but breaking the immersion of the scene was too much of a cost.
I am sorry to offer criticism without a suggestion on how to improve. :(
8/15/2019 c14 Jonathan
YOUR WRITING IS BRILLIANT! I've always believed that our upbringing plays a larger role in the formation of our personality, and i've always wished for a world where there was at least one person who is kind enough to treat child erik with compassion and love. Thank you so much for writing and posting this.
YOUR WRITING IS BRILLIANT! I've always believed that our upbringing plays a larger role in the formation of our personality, and i've always wished for a world where there was at least one person who is kind enough to treat child erik with compassion and love. Thank you so much for writing and posting this.
8/3/2019 c54 6Erika Dyer
I am sad to have come to the end of this, but it was oh so wonderful. I have an epic book hangover now. Little Daniel was such a lovely addition as well. I dread to think of Erik's reactions when his other daughters start to meet men. I have a feeling he'd be even worse to any of their suitors than with Samuel. I could honestly have kept reading about these characters even more but that's the mark of such a great story. I loved the reunion between Erik and Anna in particular, and the first few chapters with little Erik were heart breaking. I wanted to scoop him up and hug him so much. Watching him finally realise that he can be loved was so lovely. I hope his evil mother suffered alone for many years for what she did! Bravo for such another wonderful story.
6Erika DyerI am sad to have come to the end of this, but it was oh so wonderful. I have an epic book hangover now. Little Daniel was such a lovely addition as well. I dread to think of Erik's reactions when his other daughters start to meet men. I have a feeling he'd be even worse to any of their suitors than with Samuel. I could honestly have kept reading about these characters even more but that's the mark of such a great story. I loved the reunion between Erik and Anna in particular, and the first few chapters with little Erik were heart breaking. I wanted to scoop him up and hug him so much. Watching him finally realise that he can be loved was so lovely. I hope his evil mother suffered alone for many years for what she did! Bravo for such another wonderful story.
7/27/2019 c9 Erika Dyer
Aaarg I hate Suzette! hate her! She doesn't deserve to breath the same air as dear sweet Erik.
Aaarg I hate Suzette! hate her! She doesn't deserve to breath the same air as dear sweet Erik.
5/18/2019 c31 Bookworm-57-99
HE PROPOSED!
SHE SAID YES!
THEY ADMITTED THEIR FEELINGS FOR ONE ANOTHER!
HE PROPOSED!
SHE SAID YES!
THEY ADMITTED THEIR FEELINGS FOR ONE ANOTHER!
5/18/2019 c29 Bookworm-57-99
I got a little mad that Christine took off the mask, but when Erik came clean and Christine touched his fave, my heart exploded with love for the two of them!
I got a little mad that Christine took off the mask, but when Erik came clean and Christine touched his fave, my heart exploded with love for the two of them!
2/20/2019 c54 booknerdphan234
Oh no. It seems my tears will never end.
I so enjoyed this book! I cannot wait to purchase it for myself! And the bonus chapters melted my heart... That ending, especially. It kinda breaks my heart to think of Erik and Christine aging, those sweet angel babies.
Oh, goodness... I think I need some air.
Oh no. It seems my tears will never end.
I so enjoyed this book! I cannot wait to purchase it for myself! And the bonus chapters melted my heart... That ending, especially. It kinda breaks my heart to think of Erik and Christine aging, those sweet angel babies.
Oh, goodness... I think I need some air.
2/20/2019 c50 booknerdphan234
Okay. I came to this story to escape an all-consuming book hangover/depression. You just went out and stole my heart again with your writing. How dare you. I don't even feel safe in my own home, consumed by these words. I'm sad to see another end, but I just can't stop reading! Soon, I'm going to have read all your work, and I'll be left feeling mighty sad indeed. There's never enough!
But I am in love with these semi-extra chapters! And I adored your work with Christine being blind. It was all very sweet and tied together nicely.
Okay. I came to this story to escape an all-consuming book hangover/depression. You just went out and stole my heart again with your writing. How dare you. I don't even feel safe in my own home, consumed by these words. I'm sad to see another end, but I just can't stop reading! Soon, I'm going to have read all your work, and I'll be left feeling mighty sad indeed. There's never enough!
But I am in love with these semi-extra chapters! And I adored your work with Christine being blind. It was all very sweet and tied together nicely.