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22spottedrooster
It's nice to see new and original content in this section. You write Jehan and Quasimodo well. It is clear that Claude Frollo is your favourite, too. You handle his twisted perspective is beautifully.
If Frollo had gone to the regular doctor, he may not have fared so well. The nun likely did a far better job of looking after him.
Quasimodo is slowly going crazy. Cabin fever to the extreme.
22spottedroosterIt's nice to see new and original content in this section. You write Jehan and Quasimodo well. It is clear that Claude Frollo is your favourite, too. You handle his twisted perspective is beautifully.
If Frollo had gone to the regular doctor, he may not have fared so well. The nun likely did a far better job of looking after him.
Quasimodo is slowly going crazy. Cabin fever to the extreme.
8/1/2016 c19 4noodle-caboodle
I don't remember if I already posted a review for this story yet I'm very tired but when I saw the notification email for the newest chapter it totally brightened my night! I got to reading asap and as always I'm excited and sad to wait for the next chapter. You writing is so wonderful, and detailed perfectly. It's truly a pleasure to read your work :)
4noodle-caboodleI don't remember if I already posted a review for this story yet I'm very tired but when I saw the notification email for the newest chapter it totally brightened my night! I got to reading asap and as always I'm excited and sad to wait for the next chapter. You writing is so wonderful, and detailed perfectly. It's truly a pleasure to read your work :)
8/1/2016 c19 hannahcooper654
I absolutely love this story and everything else you have written. The way you portray both Claude and Jehan make the setting even more realistic and very enjoyable.
I absolutely love this story and everything else you have written. The way you portray both Claude and Jehan make the setting even more realistic and very enjoyable.
4/28/2016 c18 ChicRockerGeek
Yay for the new chapter! This is one of my favorite fics right now and I'm loving the direction it's going in, especially since it seems like Jehan is going down a dark path. We all know he won't be there by the time the Disney movie starts, so I wonder what happens...maybe Claude ends up having him banished from Paris or he gets into real trouble. Still, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Yay for the new chapter! This is one of my favorite fics right now and I'm loving the direction it's going in, especially since it seems like Jehan is going down a dark path. We all know he won't be there by the time the Disney movie starts, so I wonder what happens...maybe Claude ends up having him banished from Paris or he gets into real trouble. Still, I can't wait for the next chapter!
4/27/2016 c17 Guest
More please
More please
4/26/2016 c17 Tamara Manno
Hi I tried to find u on DA, but can't, I love love LOVE the hunchback of Notre Dame! I hope u finish this story and write more by the way, if you wanna find me on DA, Im ladyeyeballz83
Hi I tried to find u on DA, but can't, I love love LOVE the hunchback of Notre Dame! I hope u finish this story and write more by the way, if you wanna find me on DA, Im ladyeyeballz83
4/11/2016 c17 ChicRockerGeek
Yay, you have returned with a new chapter! I like the time skip to help push things forward time-wise, and once again, I love how the Brothers Frollo interact and don't get along. I can't wait for your next chapter! (which I hope is soon)
Yay, you have returned with a new chapter! I like the time skip to help push things forward time-wise, and once again, I love how the Brothers Frollo interact and don't get along. I can't wait for your next chapter! (which I hope is soon)
1/6/2016 c16 2owleyes1213
I meant to review this as soon as I got the alert, (Which by the way, I squealed a bit) It's really great hearing from this story! I couldn't upload a single chapter this semester myself I was so freaking swamped with shit! I know the feeling, and it was a great chapter none the less.
If you're having difficulty perhaps a time skip would do? You've covered some important background info such as a run in with Esme and Clopin and the relationship between Jehan and Quasi.
Some more scenes including an older Esme or perhaps the Gypsies in general could work well since you've kind of tied off Jehan-being-an-asshat-and-Claude-vowing-not to-fall-for-his-shitty-pranks-but-ends-up-doing-it-because-he's-a-lowkey-pushover pretty well.
It honestly can go anyway from here, we've read a lot about his personal relationships but now that Gypsies are becoming a bigger threat on his radar, focusing on them would be a good way to go.
Hope this finds you well and hope you had a happy holiday and happy new year!
2owleyes1213I meant to review this as soon as I got the alert, (Which by the way, I squealed a bit) It's really great hearing from this story! I couldn't upload a single chapter this semester myself I was so freaking swamped with shit! I know the feeling, and it was a great chapter none the less.
If you're having difficulty perhaps a time skip would do? You've covered some important background info such as a run in with Esme and Clopin and the relationship between Jehan and Quasi.
Some more scenes including an older Esme or perhaps the Gypsies in general could work well since you've kind of tied off Jehan-being-an-asshat-and-Claude-vowing-not to-fall-for-his-shitty-pranks-but-ends-up-doing-it-because-he's-a-lowkey-pushover pretty well.
It honestly can go anyway from here, we've read a lot about his personal relationships but now that Gypsies are becoming a bigger threat on his radar, focusing on them would be a good way to go.
Hope this finds you well and hope you had a happy holiday and happy new year!
12/22/2015 c16 Octavo
Maybe (the author) should use some material from the 2 hunchback of Notre dame movie
Like la Fiedel or that the day of love explain how frollo despises the day because it being a holiday of love ,use some of that material like the special bell is the first bell quasi rung Before and Jehan teaching quasi card tricks and gambling to frollo a dismay
Maybe (the author) should use some material from the 2 hunchback of Notre dame movie
Like la Fiedel or that the day of love explain how frollo despises the day because it being a holiday of love ,use some of that material like the special bell is the first bell quasi rung Before and Jehan teaching quasi card tricks and gambling to frollo a dismay
12/20/2015 c14 3Malakaii
I squealed at the thought of a tiny Esmeralda. I, too, am suffering from writer's block. It's trifling! Which is why I'm here! If I submerse myself among like-minded writing, this is how I normally get inspired. And trust me, I'm inspired very much so, but I'm too curious to stop now!
3MalakaiiI squealed at the thought of a tiny Esmeralda. I, too, am suffering from writer's block. It's trifling! Which is why I'm here! If I submerse myself among like-minded writing, this is how I normally get inspired. And trust me, I'm inspired very much so, but I'm too curious to stop now!
12/20/2015 c9 Malakaii
SMOKE BOMBS!?
How interesting!
I'll admit, I was very excited to see the implementations of gypsies. And yes! Frollo's hatred for them was spot on! Always backed up by religious reckoning! I have ideas, but I'm only on chapter 9 and eagerly scouring my way along, so I wont suggest anything until the end! Great job!
SMOKE BOMBS!?
How interesting!
I'll admit, I was very excited to see the implementations of gypsies. And yes! Frollo's hatred for them was spot on! Always backed up by religious reckoning! I have ideas, but I'm only on chapter 9 and eagerly scouring my way along, so I wont suggest anything until the end! Great job!
12/20/2015 c8 Malakaii
YES! I love that you braided in some history around this time. I feel like integrating actual events within stories, fiction or not, really solidifies a story. As always, love love love your writing technique and flow of words. The dialogue is effortless and convincing!
YES! I love that you braided in some history around this time. I feel like integrating actual events within stories, fiction or not, really solidifies a story. As always, love love love your writing technique and flow of words. The dialogue is effortless and convincing!