8/12/2015 c13 BlackZetzu
Oh man! I love your Story! I always have been a huge fan of Frollo as father or father figure and your story is perfect xD
I really support Frollo in his current situation although I think he's too gentle to jehan ((yeah, book, I know...) BUT! The best BEST best moment of this was when Claude kicked his ass *_* omg, I loved it so much xD)
I'm so excited to see who shows up next :D
Oh man! I love your Story! I always have been a huge fan of Frollo as father or father figure and your story is perfect xD
I really support Frollo in his current situation although I think he's too gentle to jehan ((yeah, book, I know...) BUT! The best BEST best moment of this was when Claude kicked his ass *_* omg, I loved it so much xD)
I'm so excited to see who shows up next :D
8/10/2015 c13 2owleyes1213
Adorable baby Quasi made my heart melt into bits! Goodness, how I love his innocence and his questions gah!~
Claude's character development is so accurate. You really have a knack for getting into Claude Frollo's head. Jehan makes me laugh every time, but to finally see him interact with Quasi in an endearing way was fabulous! I always look forward to your updates!
I appreciate the shoutout! I'm currently drafting a re-do of my Frollo hat, so it was very fitting to read this XD Hope you're well and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Adorable baby Quasi made my heart melt into bits! Goodness, how I love his innocence and his questions gah!~
Claude's character development is so accurate. You really have a knack for getting into Claude Frollo's head. Jehan makes me laugh every time, but to finally see him interact with Quasi in an endearing way was fabulous! I always look forward to your updates!
I appreciate the shoutout! I'm currently drafting a re-do of my Frollo hat, so it was very fitting to read this XD Hope you're well and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
8/9/2015 c12 shennyfac31
Wow! I think your chapters are getting better and better! This is indeed an awesome one, showing both the dark side and the loving side of Frollo :) I just really love it! Keep going! It's such a worth-reading story!
Wow! I think your chapters are getting better and better! This is indeed an awesome one, showing both the dark side and the loving side of Frollo :) I just really love it! Keep going! It's such a worth-reading story!
8/5/2015 c12 owleyes1213
I love how you entered a more sentimental brotherhood dynamic! I loved it. You keep Claude's character is so intact. I was thinking to myself, "Oh is he going to reveal his back and talk about his father?" But the fact you let him show something so subtle and so meaningful was actually incredibly profound: Claude is not one to show so much. He is a man of a few words, but their usually curt and insulting XD
I began writing my own story here and it's, well... meh. I can honestly say you have one of the best interpretations of Claude Frollo I've read so far...and the best Jehan! It's inspiring for someone like me to improve
Keep up the awesome work! I'll keep reading along and snooping on your dA page, can't wait for the next update :)
I love how you entered a more sentimental brotherhood dynamic! I loved it. You keep Claude's character is so intact. I was thinking to myself, "Oh is he going to reveal his back and talk about his father?" But the fact you let him show something so subtle and so meaningful was actually incredibly profound: Claude is not one to show so much. He is a man of a few words, but their usually curt and insulting XD
I began writing my own story here and it's, well... meh. I can honestly say you have one of the best interpretations of Claude Frollo I've read so far...and the best Jehan! It's inspiring for someone like me to improve
Keep up the awesome work! I'll keep reading along and snooping on your dA page, can't wait for the next update :)
8/5/2015 c11 owleyes1213
Quasi's first word had me cracking up! I love how well you flesh out each character! Wonderful update! I'm off to read 12~
Quasi's first word had me cracking up! I love how well you flesh out each character! Wonderful update! I'm off to read 12~
7/31/2015 c11 Good-work-captain
Ah Jehan was so close, too bad wine got the best of him. I like how human you write Frollo's character, you can tell that he genuinely loves and cares about his brother. I wonder what's going to happen next0_o Nice chapter title btw!
Ah Jehan was so close, too bad wine got the best of him. I like how human you write Frollo's character, you can tell that he genuinely loves and cares about his brother. I wonder what's going to happen next0_o Nice chapter title btw!
7/29/2015 c11 shennyfac31
What an exciting chapter! And it's needless to say that I'm looking forward to the next one ;) And yes I enjoyed Quasi's first word & Jehan's first mission :)
What an exciting chapter! And it's needless to say that I'm looking forward to the next one ;) And yes I enjoyed Quasi's first word & Jehan's first mission :)
7/18/2015 c10 BlackZetzu
I want to know absolutely everything about his current reaction related to his child. How he think about it in silent hours and it would be absolutely perfect if there would be a reuinion. Omg! Claude! I still can't stop trembling of excitement xD this story is AWESOME
I want to know absolutely everything about his current reaction related to his child. How he think about it in silent hours and it would be absolutely perfect if there would be a reuinion. Omg! Claude! I still can't stop trembling of excitement xD this story is AWESOME
7/16/2015 c10 shennyfac31
Another good chapter! And I kind of want to see Celeste again ;) But it's ok if you have other plans :) I wonder if she has something to do with Quasimodo. Maybe she knows his father? (or mother?) Anyway, I'm always looking forward to your story! ;)
Another good chapter! And I kind of want to see Celeste again ;) But it's ok if you have other plans :) I wonder if she has something to do with Quasimodo. Maybe she knows his father? (or mother?) Anyway, I'm always looking forward to your story! ;)
7/15/2015 c10 Good-work-captain
No problem, thank you for the wonderful story. Gah you're so talented I can't handle it, your writing is so remarkable and has such vivid description like I can mentally picture Frollo doing all of these things. I'm glad that celeste came up in this, I love seeing Frollo's reaction and how much his heart still aches. Such great character development, keep up the good work :) Hope you had fun at the Comic Con and if you ever need help stirring up ideas to get out of writers block I'll be more than happy to assist you!
No problem, thank you for the wonderful story. Gah you're so talented I can't handle it, your writing is so remarkable and has such vivid description like I can mentally picture Frollo doing all of these things. I'm glad that celeste came up in this, I love seeing Frollo's reaction and how much his heart still aches. Such great character development, keep up the good work :) Hope you had fun at the Comic Con and if you ever need help stirring up ideas to get out of writers block I'll be more than happy to assist you!
7/14/2015 c10 Lookingaway12
I just recently finished your previous story, "Little Boy Frollo" and I must say bravo! Your writing talents are absolutely beautiful, the detail, the characters just magnificent. I will admit it brought tears to my eyes a couple of times through out the story. I'm super excited that your making a second part, and can't wait to find out what happens next!
I just recently finished your previous story, "Little Boy Frollo" and I must say bravo! Your writing talents are absolutely beautiful, the detail, the characters just magnificent. I will admit it brought tears to my eyes a couple of times through out the story. I'm super excited that your making a second part, and can't wait to find out what happens next!