for Danger Zone7/25/2016 c7 
23Kadrian
Update? *hopeful look* Your writing is great! So whatsa gonna happen next? Can't wait! Please update...(dot x a million of them)
23KadrianUpdate? *hopeful look* Your writing is great! So whatsa gonna happen next? Can't wait! Please update...(dot x a million of them)
6/21/2016 c6 saveyour950
It's been so long since you updated, but it was a good chapter. Oh no I hope Will's hand is saved when the curse is lifted or something like that. I can't bear the thought of him not being a ranger. Alyssa's secret is also interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update.
It's been so long since you updated, but it was a good chapter. Oh no I hope Will's hand is saved when the curse is lifted or something like that. I can't bear the thought of him not being a ranger. Alyssa's secret is also interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update.
6/19/2016 c6 pennydragon
If you could have dramatic music playing for that last line it would work so well. :)
If you could have dramatic music playing for that last line it would work so well. :)
6/19/2016 c6 7whentheresawill
*SCEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAM* AN UPDATE? Can it be? Is it really true? This is the best day ever! I was afraid you had let the story go. Please tell me you haven't let it go. It's so so so good...please don't let it go. I still wanna know what Alyss is too afraid to tell Will? It's been irking me so much D:
7whentheresawill*SCEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAM* AN UPDATE? Can it be? Is it really true? This is the best day ever! I was afraid you had let the story go. Please tell me you haven't let it go. It's so so so good...please don't let it go. I still wanna know what Alyss is too afraid to tell Will? It's been irking me so much D:
1/14/2016 c5 Anonymous
Please update or finish it in some way. Please please please
Please update or finish it in some way. Please please please
11/23/2015 c5 saveyour950
Oh no! Not Will's ranger career. I have to know how this ends. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Oh no! Not Will's ranger career. I have to know how this ends. I'm looking forward to the next update!
8/26/2015 c5 TheBubbleBee
I'm so sorry that I haven't rewied(?) before, but I'm reading on a app, and it does not want to post my comments :/
Anyway, I love this story! It is great :D
The only thing is that when you read as many stories as I do at the same time, it gets a little hard to keep them apart - so when you have this long time between updates, I have forgotten everything xD
Sorry 4 my bad English, it isn't my native language...
I'm so sorry that I haven't rewied(?) before, but I'm reading on a app, and it does not want to post my comments :/
Anyway, I love this story! It is great :D
The only thing is that when you read as many stories as I do at the same time, it gets a little hard to keep them apart - so when you have this long time between updates, I have forgotten everything xD
Sorry 4 my bad English, it isn't my native language...
8/25/2015 c5 2moniquebowman
The feels of that last line..
Like I'm crying inside
You write really well so I hope I see more stories from you, even if you decide not to update this one in particular :)
Xx
2moniquebowmanThe feels of that last line..
Like I'm crying inside
You write really well so I hope I see more stories from you, even if you decide not to update this one in particular :)
Xx
8/21/2015 c4 Guest
LOVE THE STORY! Please write more! I really want to know what happens! :D
LOVE THE STORY! Please write more! I really want to know what happens! :D
8/21/2015 c4 Guest
Please write more! I love the story and I really want to know the ending! You're a very skilled writer! :D
Please write more! I love the story and I really want to know the ending! You're a very skilled writer! :D
6/17/2015 c4 BILL
I want more! Please
I want more! Please