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2/11/2017 c27 Sue Dooley
Fantastic! Great writing! Good job Jordan. Brave man. Go team Gibbs get Jordan home. Tiva forever.
I think many of us are concerned about Cote.
2/11/2017 c27 17DS2010
glad they found out where Jordan is being held and is going to get her back.
1/31/2017 c26 7AureaD
I'm glad to say little Jordan is a fighter. I hope she doesn't manage to escape her captor and run off and get lost. Tony will find her I know.
1/30/2017 c26 4YaleAceBella12
Send her to gitmo! Please write more...
1/30/2017 c26 Safara Bellamy
I want Zoe arrested spending the rest of her life in prison, she should sit alone in a prison cell for a long time. For me I think death would be too quick and easy.
1/30/2017 c26 Guest
Ziva should get to beat the snot out of her. Then she goes to jail
1/30/2017 c26 Sue Dooley
Wow! Poor Jordan. Great writing! Arrested and made to suffer for life. Sentenced to life in prison no parole. Tiva forever.
1/30/2017 c26 Guest
Arrested but needs an asskicking to go with it ...lol
1/8/2017 c25 Safara Bellamy
This chapter was exciting and tense, excellent story and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope they find Jordan soon, poor distraught Ziva and Tony.
1/3/2017 c25 Sue Dooley
Awesome! Tiva forever.
1/2/2017 c25 17DS2010
Hoping they get Jordan back and stop Zoe. Damn school letting her go with her. Really schools should never let children go with anyone without contacting the parents first.
1/2/2017 c25 Guest
OMG keep jordan safe! let gibbs catch this bitch. Hes lost a child and knows tony and zivas hearts r breaking. UPDATE SOON!
1/2/2017 c25 4YaleAceBella12
Please write more...️️️ So can u PM me the list of kids and ages?
12/16/2016 c24 Guest
Love this story. Looking forward to next chapter!
11/29/2016 c24 Guest
Please write more...
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