
7/15/2018 c1 Guest
Great first fan fiction! Only real issue for me is the misspelling of words. Try to spellcheck before posting!
Great first fan fiction! Only real issue for me is the misspelling of words. Try to spellcheck before posting!
9/28/2016 c1 Divergent4ever098
omg this is amazing! I could write the TobiasPOV wet dream if you want
omg this is amazing! I could write the TobiasPOV wet dream if you want
4/6/2015 c1 Scarred Moon
Amazing story! You are an amazing writer! What were you saying about not being a great writer? This is amazing!
Amazing story! You are an amazing writer! What were you saying about not being a great writer? This is amazing!
4/6/2015 c1 amity
Loooved it, really great for your first fic! This site is really lacking fourtris lemons, especially interesting ones like this, so can't wait to see what you come up with next! (Would kind of love to see a wet dream from Tobias's POV ;)
Loooved it, really great for your first fic! This site is really lacking fourtris lemons, especially interesting ones like this, so can't wait to see what you come up with next! (Would kind of love to see a wet dream from Tobias's POV ;)