4/7/2015 c1 8Compucles
Well, it's a decent idea, but it's too short, contains almost no description, and is filled with grammar errors. I'll have to pass on this one.
Well, it's a decent idea, but it's too short, contains almost no description, and is filled with grammar errors. I'll have to pass on this one.
4/7/2015 c1 5Themissofstaryskies
Very great so far! I'm really interested by this story! Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!:)
Very great so far! I'm really interested by this story! Keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!:)
4/7/2015 c1 Sebastian
I am enjoying the story and the title is perfect my only request is that you dont take long to update fangirlsweg
I am enjoying the story and the title is perfect my only request is that you dont take long to update fangirlsweg
4/7/2015 c1 Mara fray
I am in love with this story please continue
Its like natsu is the beast and Lucy the beauty falling in love with her captor :)
I am in love with this story please continue
Its like natsu is the beast and Lucy the beauty falling in love with her captor :)
4/7/2015 c1 SURFER DOOD MAN
NALU IS A GIANT FAT PURPLE DINOSUR DAT LIVES IN DUH OCEAN... ER NO, dats PEDRO SURRY. I TINKSHE SHULD ACTLY B WIT PEDRO THO CUZ HE LUFFS LUCY SUU MUCH N DAY R ALWAYS 2GETHER MAN. NATSU IS A JERKMONKEY FARTHEAD FUR BREAKIN DEM UP LOOZAH! LUDRO FUREVER, GLITCHES! PS PEDRO PAYD ME 2 DO THIS SU BUY NOW SUCKAHZ
I DONUT INDOORSE DIS STUFF IM JUST A DESPERATE SURFUR DOOD TRYIN 2 FEED HIS 300 KIDZ ON CHLID SUPPORT HVE A LITLE CUMPASSION DOOD!
NALU IS A GIANT FAT PURPLE DINOSUR DAT LIVES IN DUH OCEAN... ER NO, dats PEDRO SURRY. I TINKSHE SHULD ACTLY B WIT PEDRO THO CUZ HE LUFFS LUCY SUU MUCH N DAY R ALWAYS 2GETHER MAN. NATSU IS A JERKMONKEY FARTHEAD FUR BREAKIN DEM UP LOOZAH! LUDRO FUREVER, GLITCHES! PS PEDRO PAYD ME 2 DO THIS SU BUY NOW SUCKAHZ
I DONUT INDOORSE DIS STUFF IM JUST A DESPERATE SURFUR DOOD TRYIN 2 FEED HIS 300 KIDZ ON CHLID SUPPORT HVE A LITLE CUMPASSION DOOD!