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2DdraigTrueEmperor9
This was a nice chapter and I finally was able to re-read everything up to this point.
The events had been done quite nicely and the narrative has many paths to go with, something I know is extremely difficult to keep up with due to the variety of characters with their own agenda and choices.
Had to say I really enjoy the dynamics of Bulma, Tights, Pan, Goku, Raditz and Piccolo.
Personally I was disappointed Piccolo got replaced by Vegeta as Goku rival and training partner, simply because he is a fellow saiyan, obviously without any hate towards Vegeta.
I like the Namekians, their lore and culture, along with their mystical abilities and their warriors capabilities, their fusion and fission not to mention the unique ability to create their own set of Dragon Balls.
With Tight's getting ready to give birth, I hope that Goku and Bulma are on the same path during the 3 years time skip, always found the idea of them having twins one being Gohan who resembles Goku with Bulma eyes and the other is Trunks, something that could really work and fit with this story due to Goku and Bulma marriage.
Looking forward to the next chapter of this unique story.
2DdraigTrueEmperor9This was a nice chapter and I finally was able to re-read everything up to this point.
The events had been done quite nicely and the narrative has many paths to go with, something I know is extremely difficult to keep up with due to the variety of characters with their own agenda and choices.
Had to say I really enjoy the dynamics of Bulma, Tights, Pan, Goku, Raditz and Piccolo.
Personally I was disappointed Piccolo got replaced by Vegeta as Goku rival and training partner, simply because he is a fellow saiyan, obviously without any hate towards Vegeta.
I like the Namekians, their lore and culture, along with their mystical abilities and their warriors capabilities, their fusion and fission not to mention the unique ability to create their own set of Dragon Balls.
With Tight's getting ready to give birth, I hope that Goku and Bulma are on the same path during the 3 years time skip, always found the idea of them having twins one being Gohan who resembles Goku with Bulma eyes and the other is Trunks, something that could really work and fit with this story due to Goku and Bulma marriage.
Looking forward to the next chapter of this unique story.
1/20 c52 leonardmosca476
I hope everything's okay I'm looking forward to some updates soon I hope you're safe and well and I hope you're safe and well
I hope everything's okay I'm looking forward to some updates soon I hope you're safe and well and I hope you're safe and well
12/4/2024 c52 2CaptainKriss S5-SIERRA-117
Since you put mana as official power source for magic. I hope Goku have full mastery of Ki to counter such foe.I don't know but just make him somehow go to planet yadrat and learn something useful there. Also where is Prince of all saiyan btw. Try to spread his royal seed some where lol
2CaptainKriss S5-SIERRA-117Since you put mana as official power source for magic. I hope Goku have full mastery of Ki to counter such foe.I don't know but just make him somehow go to planet yadrat and learn something useful there. Also where is Prince of all saiyan btw. Try to spread his royal seed some where lol
11/17/2024 c3 Guest
Since it's childhood friends themed you shouldn't have Bulma date Yamcha.
Even in this fic she's still Yamcha's sloppy seconds. lmao
Since it's childhood friends themed you shouldn't have Bulma date Yamcha.
Even in this fic she's still Yamcha's sloppy seconds. lmao
10/17/2024 c52 Gilgamesh50
Hope you update
This is also my past time lentioning this but i wholly disagree with the pan character as goku daughter, just makes no sense. Also with your writing i wouldve loved to see gohan grow up in this kind of household and see how he would turn out ngl. And i want to see goten and trunks as brothers doing soem
Fun adventure stuff but yeah thats my wishfull thinking
Hope you update
This is also my past time lentioning this but i wholly disagree with the pan character as goku daughter, just makes no sense. Also with your writing i wouldve loved to see gohan grow up in this kind of household and see how he would turn out ngl. And i want to see goten and trunks as brothers doing soem
Fun adventure stuff but yeah thats my wishfull thinking
9/10/2024 c3 ButHereIsTheSnoozer
"I'm not gonna engage in character bashing, but- [engages in character bashing anyways]", and an OOC Bulma as a bonus
"I'm not gonna engage in character bashing, but- [engages in character bashing anyways]", and an OOC Bulma as a bonus
9/4/2024 c52 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterparteverything about saiyan this blood this pride this, but tullece is just doing experimenting and less fighting now snd he is probably losing his saiyan will
Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterparteverything about saiyan this blood this pride this, but tullece is just doing experimenting and less fighting now snd he is probably losing his saiyan will
9/4/2024 c49 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterpart
Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterpart
9/4/2024 c49 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterpart
Great Chapter ima not yap about how i want gohan to be here amd his and others future counterpart
9/4/2024 c47 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter
Im still wish that gohan was born
Like no prob he can have a daughter but taking away gohan n
Im only this way cz i wanted to see what u would do with gohan
Great Chapter
Im still wish that gohan was born
Like no prob he can have a daughter but taking away gohan n
Im only this way cz i wanted to see what u would do with gohan
9/4/2024 c45 Gilgamesh50
Wouldnt it be funny if tullece died from sickness or summ instead of fighting like he wants
Wouldnt it be funny if tullece died from sickness or summ instead of fighting like he wants
9/3/2024 c39 Gilgamesh50
bruhh 100 ki blast 100 bone breaking punhes from goku and guy still
Stands
One ki blast from dude and goku jumps to protect bulma he badly injured
bruhh 100 ki blast 100 bone breaking punhes from goku and guy still
Stands
One ki blast from dude and goku jumps to protect bulma he badly injured
8/7/2024 c52 moscaleonard72
If could Help you with the story I would but I suffer from mild cases of dyslexia unfortunately
If could Help you with the story I would but I suffer from mild cases of dyslexia unfortunately
8/3/2024 c52 23poetrymagic12
And everything is being set up. I still hope it's revealed Goku and Bulma have another child. Within the 3 years. This time a son.
Bulma accepts the flaws of Goku, they known each other forever. And being their husband and wife. They love each other. That's what matters.
I hope you have Bulma wanting to see the Androids. But Goku has a protectiveness because he doesn't want to get killed. And more importantly if they have another child. Goku could remark...'now who's being reckless." Makes it funny since Bulma addressing her husband was...
Is Krillin still going to have a crush on 18? I hope so.
Keep writing. I can't wait for the next update.
23poetrymagic12And everything is being set up. I still hope it's revealed Goku and Bulma have another child. Within the 3 years. This time a son.
Bulma accepts the flaws of Goku, they known each other forever. And being their husband and wife. They love each other. That's what matters.
I hope you have Bulma wanting to see the Androids. But Goku has a protectiveness because he doesn't want to get killed. And more importantly if they have another child. Goku could remark...'now who's being reckless." Makes it funny since Bulma addressing her husband was...
Is Krillin still going to have a crush on 18? I hope so.
Keep writing. I can't wait for the next update.