
12/30/2016 c1
1A New User
Thank god with no DNA machine Shirou's Takami's son cliche. That's like 95% of the fics in this section. I expect a few organizations will take notice and infiltrate Shin Tokyo to find out just what the hell is going on. There are really few fics in which the Executors and Enforcers come in, and I want to see it happen.

Thank god with no DNA machine Shirou's Takami's son cliche. That's like 95% of the fics in this section. I expect a few organizations will take notice and infiltrate Shin Tokyo to find out just what the hell is going on. There are really few fics in which the Executors and Enforcers come in, and I want to see it happen.
5/31/2016 c1 Guest
While I enjoy this I just want to point out that as far as I am aware the opening of most of the fics in this section were inspired if not outright taken from In Flight by gabriel blessing
While I enjoy this I just want to point out that as far as I am aware the opening of most of the fics in this section were inspired if not outright taken from In Flight by gabriel blessing
3/29/2016 c1
7Paxloria
Nice chapter!
Theres a few small errors though.
huh, Shirou really DID luck out here. I guess the situation wasn't so bad that the Counter Force needed him there..

Nice chapter!
Theres a few small errors though.
huh, Shirou really DID luck out here. I guess the situation wasn't so bad that the Counter Force needed him there..
5/26/2015 c1
3Acolyte of the Blood Moon
Loved it. Yeah, I know all of the stories have the same start. Gabrielsblessing (excuse me if I wrote the name wrong) set the standards pretty high and had a good starting scene.

Loved it. Yeah, I know all of the stories have the same start. Gabrielsblessing (excuse me if I wrote the name wrong) set the standards pretty high and had a good starting scene.
4/18/2015 c1
2RockLobster8994
You know that they all start like that because virtually all of them are In Flight spinoffs right? It's not really a thing people do when writing an original background for the story

You know that they all start like that because virtually all of them are In Flight spinoffs right? It's not really a thing people do when writing an original background for the story
4/11/2015 c1 anon156
Story's good. Only things that killed it are some grammar mistakes here and there.
Story's good. Only things that killed it are some grammar mistakes here and there.
4/8/2015 c1 Guest
Oh god this is so true, most other fics just copied In Flight's beginning that I usually skip the whole first chapter!
Oh god this is so true, most other fics just copied In Flight's beginning that I usually skip the whole first chapter!