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32Jake Crepeau
Actually, canon doesn't say a thing about how Wizengamot seats are awarded. That means the "how" is up for grabs. The hereditary thing is fanon, and it is logical, seeing as magical society is at least a century behind the times, and in early times, such governmental positions were indeed hereditary. (As I understand it, that's still true today for some seats in the House of Lords.)
32Jake CrepeauActually, canon doesn't say a thing about how Wizengamot seats are awarded. That means the "how" is up for grabs. The hereditary thing is fanon, and it is logical, seeing as magical society is at least a century behind the times, and in early times, such governmental positions were indeed hereditary. (As I understand it, that's still true today for some seats in the House of Lords.)
6/8 c18 Guest
"Since school was still in session Harry could practice magic in front of people and not get reprimanded."
Isn't he already emancipated & considered legal to perform magic? I remember that being something that Harry put to test, earlier in the story, when he first practiced with the time distortion device. He did magic and didn't receive any trouble from the ministry. And the magic was also done in a muggle dwelling too.
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"Since school was still in session Harry could practice magic in front of people and not get reprimanded."
Isn't he already emancipated & considered legal to perform magic? I remember that being something that Harry put to test, earlier in the story, when he first practiced with the time distortion device. He did magic and didn't receive any trouble from the ministry. And the magic was also done in a muggle dwelling too.
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6/8 c11 Guest
You just killed the energy for this story. Snape hates harry since before he had ever met him. He's nothing more than an infantilized male, with childhood issues that he still carries to this day. And not only with his childhood rivals, but the son of said rival. Any adult whom ever displayed that level of idiocracy would never be around children and would also probably be locked up in a psych ward somewhere.
You just killed the energy for this story. Snape hates harry since before he had ever met him. He's nothing more than an infantilized male, with childhood issues that he still carries to this day. And not only with his childhood rivals, but the son of said rival. Any adult whom ever displayed that level of idiocracy would never be around children and would also probably be locked up in a psych ward somewhere.
5/17 c1 Natalie4q6
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4/30 c22 00
Much better way of handling Dumbledore than most. You remembered the old adage: good intention do not always lead to good results.
Much better way of handling Dumbledore than most. You remembered the old adage: good intention do not always lead to good results.
4/15 c22 Guest
Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it and it’s great. You actually did kind of an epilogue for it.
Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it and it’s great. You actually did kind of an epilogue for it.
3/24 c20 1Boomshanka
So anticlimatic... here's another suggestion, if you feel. Let Nagini and Voldemort die, when Harry ambushes him. And then Harry comes to know Voldemort is dead .. let him keep this secret from everyone...let Dumbledore not have the peace in death
1BoomshankaSo anticlimatic... here's another suggestion, if you feel. Let Nagini and Voldemort die, when Harry ambushes him. And then Harry comes to know Voldemort is dead .. let him keep this secret from everyone...let Dumbledore not have the peace in death
2/24 c22 Guest
thank you - what a great story , I am glad I came across this
thank you - what a great story , I am glad I came across this
2/23 c1 Wendy
what a fantastic start to a story first story or not it's great- I can't wait to read the rest - thank you
what a fantastic start to a story first story or not it's great- I can't wait to read the rest - thank you
2/12 c22 Guest
Really enjoyed this different take on Harry taking control. However, he was far too patient with the Order and the way they treated him, I found myself almost yelling at him to tell them off. And as for Hermione's constant criticism, it was so annoying, especially as he never really told her to stop, it became tedious in the end.
Really enjoyed this different take on Harry taking control. However, he was far too patient with the Order and the way they treated him, I found myself almost yelling at him to tell them off. And as for Hermione's constant criticism, it was so annoying, especially as he never really told her to stop, it became tedious in the end.