
6/10/2016 c43
1katherinewrites
I haven't reviewed only because this is already over but I seriously freaking cried when Elena died. I NEVER CRY EVER! WHY YOU DO DIS... :( -E

I haven't reviewed only because this is already over but I seriously freaking cried when Elena died. I NEVER CRY EVER! WHY YOU DO DIS... :( -E
6/8/2016 c9 katherinewrites
I really like Autumn and her story. However,, I do wish Meghan would have visited her in the Final Goodbyes. Whatever, though. -E
I really like Autumn and her story. However,, I do wish Meghan would have visited her in the Final Goodbyes. Whatever, though. -E
6/8/2016 c3 katherinewrites
Even though this story is over and you'll never see this, I'm reading it anyways. It's pretty good and I hope to get good like this one day! I personally like Isabelle more.
Even though this story is over and you'll never see this, I'm reading it anyways. It's pretty good and I hope to get good like this one day! I personally like Isabelle more.
3/13/2016 c47 Red Castellan
OH MY GOD! THIS WAS SOOOOO AMAZING!
Do you know how much you improved during the course of this story? Like, it's amazing! You're amazing!
My favourites were Elena, Cooper, Autumn, Nikki and Coro. I don't get why anyone would hate Autumn, she was amazing in my opinion.
Coro won!- only to die... Seriously, that was so unexpected! Like, what? Eliah! What a man! He's cruel and yet I can't help but love his character. Why?
Oh and the plot was amazing too. And I especially loved the no bloodbath idea! Some bits of this were so hilarious. And superpower thing was cool too!
But the best part was Cooper and Elena's friendship. It was one of the best tales of friendship I have ever read.
Over all this story is one of a kind and I absolutely adored it and it was an AMAZING read!
OH MY GOD! THIS WAS SOOOOO AMAZING!
Do you know how much you improved during the course of this story? Like, it's amazing! You're amazing!
My favourites were Elena, Cooper, Autumn, Nikki and Coro. I don't get why anyone would hate Autumn, she was amazing in my opinion.
Coro won!- only to die... Seriously, that was so unexpected! Like, what? Eliah! What a man! He's cruel and yet I can't help but love his character. Why?
Oh and the plot was amazing too. And I especially loved the no bloodbath idea! Some bits of this were so hilarious. And superpower thing was cool too!
But the best part was Cooper and Elena's friendship. It was one of the best tales of friendship I have ever read.
Over all this story is one of a kind and I absolutely adored it and it was an AMAZING read!
1/29/2016 c49 LlamaRoid
I JUST FINISHED READING YOUR STORY AND OH MY GOD! IM SO SCREWED OVER THIS IS AMAZING! I FEEL SO BAD FOR CORO! those bloopers were fucking amazing omg Elena being smart?! WTF?! XD good job! I'm going to read your next one now :D
I JUST FINISHED READING YOUR STORY AND OH MY GOD! IM SO SCREWED OVER THIS IS AMAZING! I FEEL SO BAD FOR CORO! those bloopers were fucking amazing omg Elena being smart?! WTF?! XD good job! I'm going to read your next one now :D
12/29/2015 c49
5Anslvy
OMG YESSS ALL OF THEM! ;D THEY WERE SO AMAZING, AND I'M CRYING TEARS OF JOY! No, I'm not, but this was a fun ride! I bet TSCG will be a million times better, though... Only one way to find out. ;0

OMG YESSS ALL OF THEM! ;D THEY WERE SO AMAZING, AND I'M CRYING TEARS OF JOY! No, I'm not, but this was a fun ride! I bet TSCG will be a million times better, though... Only one way to find out. ;0
12/28/2015 c49
1FabulousAbby
this was a nice last chapter. You've done good my friend.
I liked the last one XD Yes, just yes. I can totes see this happening in games, why it no canon? Oh well, it's gold. YAY
FGUIFPIUAOPUGBOHWUAISB NO LAST CHAPTER MEANS NO MORE OMRI AND COOPER AND NIKKI AND ELENA AND WHATS HIS FACE AND ;-; I will miss them. RIP everyone in these games...you shall be remembered ;-;

this was a nice last chapter. You've done good my friend.
I liked the last one XD Yes, just yes. I can totes see this happening in games, why it no canon? Oh well, it's gold. YAY
FGUIFPIUAOPUGBOHWUAISB NO LAST CHAPTER MEANS NO MORE OMRI AND COOPER AND NIKKI AND ELENA AND WHATS HIS FACE AND ;-; I will miss them. RIP everyone in these games...you shall be remembered ;-;
12/28/2015 c49 TheEmeraldQueen
THEY WERE ALL GOOD. My favorites were the over 9000 one with Elena, and that lucky charms thing I just witnessed between Jacob and Colton.
THEY WERE ALL GOOD. My favorites were the over 9000 one with Elena, and that lucky charms thing I just witnessed between Jacob and Colton.
12/28/2015 c49
3Ripple237
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Loved this chapter btw

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12/18/2015 c48
9The Awesome Novice Writer
A huge congrats on getting this far on your SYOT. Where most people don't even get past the reapings, you've given us forty eight chapters of teenagers killing other teenagers for the entertainment of both us and the fictional Capitol. Well done us readers, we'd like to think we're better than the Capitol, but what are we doing?
Anyway... I can see why the most hated were the most hated and the most fav were the most fav. I expected those results. Though, I still think Autumn was awesome. Her story might of had huge plot holes, but I use my imagination and lack of insight to cover those holes.
The D9 rebel hideout just blew up? Just like that?
Now, for what I hope the final chapter explains why in the wide wide world would Eliah plan to have Coro die in the arena and kidnap his brother? I mean, that just seems like a huge amount of extra effort to me. And it's not like nobody wouldn't notice that the entire family is missing/dead. My imagination says, he hides in the victor village, nobody but the victors are allowed in the victor village.

A huge congrats on getting this far on your SYOT. Where most people don't even get past the reapings, you've given us forty eight chapters of teenagers killing other teenagers for the entertainment of both us and the fictional Capitol. Well done us readers, we'd like to think we're better than the Capitol, but what are we doing?
Anyway... I can see why the most hated were the most hated and the most fav were the most fav. I expected those results. Though, I still think Autumn was awesome. Her story might of had huge plot holes, but I use my imagination and lack of insight to cover those holes.
The D9 rebel hideout just blew up? Just like that?
Now, for what I hope the final chapter explains why in the wide wide world would Eliah plan to have Coro die in the arena and kidnap his brother? I mean, that just seems like a huge amount of extra effort to me. And it's not like nobody wouldn't notice that the entire family is missing/dead. My imagination says, he hides in the victor village, nobody but the victors are allowed in the victor village.