for A Nugget Of Advice4/11/2015 c1 
1CrypticSilhouette
Ah, please please don't add pairings. Usually they take focus off if the main point of the fic, especially if you haven't even decided if you're going to add pairings yet and what they will be. It really just interrupts the flow.
I specifically chose to read this Fic because I didn't see a romance label on it.
Hopefully my feeble and selfish argument can sway you.
1CrypticSilhouetteAh, please please don't add pairings. Usually they take focus off if the main point of the fic, especially if you haven't even decided if you're going to add pairings yet and what they will be. It really just interrupts the flow.
I specifically chose to read this Fic because I didn't see a romance label on it.
Hopefully my feeble and selfish argument can sway you.
4/10/2015 c1 Flareose - Knifepoint Entry
Very VERY, good :D
I am highly looking towards the next chapter.
Jelly and jam time.
Very VERY, good :D
I am highly looking towards the next chapter.
Jelly and jam time.
4/10/2015 c1 29Kairan1979
First of all, I have to say that I always felt that Kakashi's reasoning is BS.
Yes, Sasuke will be against Gaara, but Naruto is against Neji, the Hyuuga genius who already demonstrated he isn't above crippling a member of his own house.
"If Naruto admitted to his flaws before..." Again, shouldn't it be the Jonin sensei's job to point out on the flaws of the Genin? How it's Naruto's fault if he doesn't know where to look for the answers.
P.S. I can only imagine Naruto's improvement if his Sensei was not Kakashi but somebody like Gai; I bet Naruto will be happy with his 'geniuses of hard work' philosophy, and with Kyuubi-given stamina he could keep up with his insane training regimen.
29Kairan1979First of all, I have to say that I always felt that Kakashi's reasoning is BS.
Yes, Sasuke will be against Gaara, but Naruto is against Neji, the Hyuuga genius who already demonstrated he isn't above crippling a member of his own house.
"If Naruto admitted to his flaws before..." Again, shouldn't it be the Jonin sensei's job to point out on the flaws of the Genin? How it's Naruto's fault if he doesn't know where to look for the answers.
P.S. I can only imagine Naruto's improvement if his Sensei was not Kakashi but somebody like Gai; I bet Naruto will be happy with his 'geniuses of hard work' philosophy, and with Kyuubi-given stamina he could keep up with his insane training regimen.
4/10/2015 c1 13paradoxed
Two immediate problems that I believe should be remedied in this otherwise interesting diamond in the rough - first, no mention of Sakura. I personally do not like her as a character, but I do believe Naruto's obsessiveness would have led to him bringing the pinkette into some discussion. Second, the story is mostly dialogue and action at this point. Perhaps just an issue of being the introduction, but there's truly very little description or more in-depth introspection.
13paradoxedTwo immediate problems that I believe should be remedied in this otherwise interesting diamond in the rough - first, no mention of Sakura. I personally do not like her as a character, but I do believe Naruto's obsessiveness would have led to him bringing the pinkette into some discussion. Second, the story is mostly dialogue and action at this point. Perhaps just an issue of being the introduction, but there's truly very little description or more in-depth introspection.