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2/26/2019 c26 Jess Chen
Hermione could've still used magic - it wouldn't be a violation if it's in self defense (at least I'm pretty sure it won't be). Plus, even if the camera catches her doing magic, she can destroy the camera, right?

And no doubt she's "not responding" to the pain of the venom because she's been through worse pain...
2/15/2019 c28 aamlkb
Really? I had hoped for a better outcome.
2/15/2019 c26 aamlkb
Ugh. Use magic! And why would be bite if he’s only sucking?
2/15/2019 c22 aamlkb
Oh no the baseball field. She better use magic. I’m sick of the deception
2/15/2019 c21 aamlkb
Still why isn’t she owling Kingsley to see if she can tell them her secret? Why the delay? It makes no sense
2/15/2019 c12 aamlkb
I don’t get it. If she knows about vampires and she’s chummy with Aro then why not say who she is? It’s no like she doesn’t have a secret as well.
2/15/2019 c10 aamlkb
Haha each time I have a question, it’s answered in the next chapter!
2/15/2019 c9 aamlkb
Hmmm but why would she know to avoid the fan?
2/15/2019 c7 aamlkb
Who is gonna watch Teddy while she is at school?
2/15/2019 c6 aamlkb
How do they explain WHO Teddy is to others?
2/15/2019 c5 aamlkb
Ohhhh so Bella still exists but is not even in the story. Gotcha
2/15/2019 c4 aamlkb
No explanation on the relation?
2/15/2019 c3 aamlkb
Hmmm is Aro purposefully sending her to Edward?
2/15/2019 c2 aamlkb
Hmm are they bad guys in this one? I wonder how this plays out as the summary said she’s staying with a squib.
2/15/2019 c1 aamlkb
I love HP and I like Twilight so I was happy to find this. And complete! I like how Bella isn’t dissed in this one. I love Bella too much to keep seeing her as the bad guy or dead. I also like how it’s explained why she’s not staying to fight, Teddy and to heal. It makes it all much more believable. Good job so far!
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