for The Luna Commonwealth10/31/2020 c5 sakurhita
I love it, I wait for the next chapter
couples are tatsuya x miyuki or tatsuya x oc
I love it, I wait for the next chapter
couples are tatsuya x miyuki or tatsuya x oc
1/23/2017 c5 Fiction Judge
Will half-baked writer please, stop polluting the site with stupid writeup. If you can not write, then don't, and if you persist in writing without the skill for it, make sure you seek others opionion before posting rubbish on the site.
Your fanfiction seems to be a cut and paste of different sentences from unrelated source on the internet. THINK TWICE BEFORE YOU WRITE A BARF WORTHY , make you you take down this fiction. It is an eyesore.
Will half-baked writer please, stop polluting the site with stupid writeup. If you can not write, then don't, and if you persist in writing without the skill for it, make sure you seek others opionion before posting rubbish on the site.
Your fanfiction seems to be a cut and paste of different sentences from unrelated source on the internet. THINK TWICE BEFORE YOU WRITE A BARF WORTHY , make you you take down this fiction. It is an eyesore.
1/23/2017 c2 chimera629
is tats powers more than cannon since he as differnet powers even though the mom change doesnt really matter
is tats powers more than cannon since he as differnet powers even though the mom change doesnt really matter
7/7/2015 c2 GodofDeathandDarkness
The references! THE REFERENCES! This probably will get confusing but I like the idea so far. Hope you keep it up.
The references! THE REFERENCES! This probably will get confusing but I like the idea so far. Hope you keep it up.
4/21/2015 c3 Zenhry
Good premise the idea is good, but when the story begins?
Good premise the idea is good, but when the story begins?
4/15/2015 c2 lol
lmao that cross overs,. this is ganna be weird
lmao that cross overs,. this is ganna be weird
4/16/2015 c2 
9pyramidekheops
Where is the yotsuba family ? A fanfic without the mysterious yotsuba clan ! Sorry but it's suck !
9pyramidekheopsWhere is the yotsuba family ? A fanfic without the mysterious yotsuba clan ! Sorry but it's suck !
4/11/2015 c1 lol
2 ops mc in one story,.. lol lets see how this will go
2 ops mc in one story,.. lol lets see how this will go