for Elements of Norrisville: The Beginning and the End8/7/2015 c11 Lala Norisu
It's ok I know you be busy and I understand , cool chapter & I feel bad for her & I hope himis ok next chater . Plase make more chapter when you can ok:)
It's ok I know you be busy and I understand , cool chapter & I feel bad for her & I hope himis ok next chater . Plase make more chapter when you can ok:)
4/29/2015 c10 
35Elcall
Ah! I failed suggestions! Sorry! See, I forgot about the elements xP Ok, I'll think of something better.
Great chapter. Jenna has a fear of snow...? But I love snow! Is she scared from snow b/c maybe her parents died in snow? Is that kinda what the poem meant? Oh, and great peom as well! ;D
35ElcallAh! I failed suggestions! Sorry! See, I forgot about the elements xP Ok, I'll think of something better.
Great chapter. Jenna has a fear of snow...? But I love snow! Is she scared from snow b/c maybe her parents died in snow? Is that kinda what the poem meant? Oh, and great peom as well! ;D
4/29/2015 c10 The Phoenix
This story is interesting, and exciting. I can't believe that you finally made a story. You've turned from a person who encouraged other authors, and said to authors "Happy Story Weaving" to a super cool, and super bruce author. Keep writing, and The Phoenix Is Out!
This story is interesting, and exciting. I can't believe that you finally made a story. You've turned from a person who encouraged other authors, and said to authors "Happy Story Weaving" to a super cool, and super bruce author. Keep writing, and The Phoenix Is Out!
4/28/2015 c10 Lala Norisu
Cool&sweet chapter, I really love end of chapter. Please make more chapter soon. :)
Cool&sweet chapter, I really love end of chapter. Please make more chapter soon. :)
4/25/2015 c9 Elcall
Haha, I feel like it's been foreverrrr since you last updated! xP
As for fight scenes ideas, I have none, I'm bad at them, too! Maybe someone could find a book underwater at the Lake, while swimming or something, and the book's been preserved with some type of "magic"... or something! xP
I'm surprised that you admitted that Julian is part of their group! :D Don't know who to suggest for the others... maybe Brent as the Cowboy? Meh, just ideas!
Haha, I feel like it's been foreverrrr since you last updated! xP
As for fight scenes ideas, I have none, I'm bad at them, too! Maybe someone could find a book underwater at the Lake, while swimming or something, and the book's been preserved with some type of "magic"... or something! xP
I'm surprised that you admitted that Julian is part of their group! :D Don't know who to suggest for the others... maybe Brent as the Cowboy? Meh, just ideas!
4/25/2015 c9 Lala Norisu
Thank u for all shoutout & cool chapter & like it too. Please make more chapter soon. Please :)
Thank u for all shoutout & cool chapter & like it too. Please make more chapter soon. Please :)
4/21/2015 c8 Elcall
Great chapter! :D
WEeeellll, since you said I could guess, I'm guessing Julian might be the magician :3 Haha, you don't need to say anything about it, just a thought xP
Great chapter! :D
WEeeellll, since you said I could guess, I'm guessing Julian might be the magician :3 Haha, you don't need to say anything about it, just a thought xP