for After Dark2/18/2024 c6 AliasTesin
High tension, especially in the last chapter! Yet everything is going well, I'm happy. It's a good story, well characterized and handled with a touch of liveliness and tension
High tension, especially in the last chapter! Yet everything is going well, I'm happy. It's a good story, well characterized and handled with a touch of liveliness and tension
21/31/2022 c6 Exodus995
Sanji was severely out of character. Story was great but this chapter kinda ruined it for me
Sanji was severely out of character. Story was great but this chapter kinda ruined it for me
12/30/2021 c6 Timmy Turner2
This was good, but i think you greatly misrepresented how the crew would react.
This was good, but i think you greatly misrepresented how the crew would react.
3/5/2021 c6 JaKuZi
It was a really great story, but the problem with Sanji was too much and too staged...I don't think he would behave and the crew would tear up like that. And I missed the lesson they would learn in this situation like "heyyyyy guys, it is their relationship and you all should be happy for them? WTF?"...
It was a really great story, but the problem with Sanji was too much and too staged...I don't think he would behave and the crew would tear up like that. And I missed the lesson they would learn in this situation like "heyyyyy guys, it is their relationship and you all should be happy for them? WTF?"...
9/27/2020 c6 Nami4Life
What a garbage last chapter ,piece of shit sanji strikes again ,completely ruined it
What a garbage last chapter ,piece of shit sanji strikes again ,completely ruined it
7/4/2020 c1 MisterVoorhees
Let me say that I loved this story and would love to see you come back and continue writing
Let me say that I loved this story and would love to see you come back and continue writing
6/1/2020 c6 Guest
Very ooc, too much drama, ooc for luffy to punch zoro in this case, ooc for sanji to overreact so much
Very ooc, too much drama, ooc for luffy to punch zoro in this case, ooc for sanji to overreact so much
6/1/2020 c1 Guest
Ooc, luffy doesn't curse (much), beyond calling his enemies bastards (kono yaro) and such
Ooc, luffy doesn't curse (much), beyond calling his enemies bastards (kono yaro) and such
12/25/2019 c6 Guest
What a fucking crock of shit , they can now have a relationship because sanji fucking allows it , I’ve never cringed so fucking hard , what a fucking waste of time
What a fucking crock of shit , they can now have a relationship because sanji fucking allows it , I’ve never cringed so fucking hard , what a fucking waste of time
12/25/2019 c4 Guest
This is pointless , 3 chapters of them getting together and the rest worried about sanjis reaction , every luffy and nami fanfiction is the same and I just don’t get it , does sanji own nami or did I miss something
This is pointless , 3 chapters of them getting together and the rest worried about sanjis reaction , every luffy and nami fanfiction is the same and I just don’t get it , does sanji own nami or did I miss something
6/12/2019 c6 Jeffry
Pls make another where it tells us about what happened in the libary pls your a really good writer btw
Pls make another where it tells us about what happened in the libary pls your a really good writer btw