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9/7/2021 c1
dude get a beta reader there are a bunch of spelling mistakes and missing words
5/11/2021 c7 Born2BeGodLike
Now I lost interest in continuing. They pair up way to early, Blake out character and you doing it again in not separating who talking. I had to once again re-read it just to figure out who said what. The story so far look good but you wrote slightly bad.
5/11/2021 c3 Born2BeGodLike
Much better. Now I know who saying what now. Glad to see this change done.
5/11/2021 c1 Born2BeGodLike
Mistake #1 appears already. Instead separating when each character talks. It instead mix together. Why do they do it? Now I'm going to have to re read to make sure I know who saying what.
3/6/2021 c38 6joeyginise
Hate to tell ya this buddy, but uh, your story just might be garbage. But worry not, for there is a cure!

It's called practice, and it isn't a one time thing.
3/6/2021 c36 joeyginise
The Deaths were taken to lightly. If anything, all of Team RWBY should be disgusted by all the murder happening before them. You clearly don't know anything about these characters at all.
10/7/2019 c21 1Nitro zeus
I know what that’s like
My great grandpa Norman died in November too
9/26/2018 c7 XenoLucifer
Grammar is alot better than in the first chapter.
9/26/2018 c5 XenoLucifer
What good is having 100% of his aura displayed if he can only use 40%
9/26/2018 c1 XenoLucifer
Oof the grammar.
1/31/2017 c2 4JessesanMan
Can't read it. Everything is junked up together.
9/27/2016 c11 Guest
Jaune's weapon is named Crocea Mars
9/27/2016 c5 Guest
Um...doesn't it take longer than one day for someone to confess their love to someone else since they barely know each other?
7/1/2016 c18 2ChimaTigon
I look at that website too.
6/18/2016 c1 1delta2177
after reading this all the way through I feel I should say this you are out of your mind in the best way possible keep up the good work :)
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