2/28/2016 c40 Guest
Oh my god yes, yes, yes I know you were going to make a RWBY/Primeval crossover. I should tell that I was searching for a RWBY/Primeval crossover and they didn't show anything. But here it is, and surprisingly it will continue the adventure of Darrel Maximus, and his friends, Teams RWBY, JNPR, CFVY and SSSN as something strange is going on in the world of Remnant. Strange portals called anomalies are starting to appear all over Remnant on each continent. They are doorways in time to worlds everyone can barely imagine. The portals are conclusive proof that the past exists in a fourth dimension as real and solid as those the huntsman and huntresses already know. Now it's Darrel and friends job to predict and contain them, they will also need to deal with the prehistoric and futuristic species of animals to get them back to where they belong, while dealing with the sinister creature of Grimm, and of course Cinder and the rest of the villains. Oh and can you make Darrel say that quote that Nick Cutter said. In every chapter of this new story. Oh and the one of my favorite chapters is the final. I love the idea of Darrel Maximus transforming into a more powerful, fictional DNA enhanced prehistoric species of animal, a fictional species of dinosaur to be exact. I love that you called it Super Tyrannosaurus rex, Super , or Super Dinosaur. But you would've given his animal form another name like Ultimate rex, Ultimate Dinosaur, or Super Ultra . Or Tyranno Prime and Rexzilla (Like Godzilla) would both be good names as well. Because how short the trailer is, I think it's more like a teaser than a trailer, so why not make a second trailer. I think it would be great. The characters of one of my favorite anime, RWBY dealing with animals that should not be in the modern world. Oh and you know what they say, new OC characters, new Creatures of Grimm, new teams of huntsman and huntresses (Especially the OCs) , and new beasts that Darrel will show us when he transforms into them. But I wonder what was that unknown species of animal that we only see it's albino foot. I got a feeling that this story will take place between volumes 2 and 3 just like the video game based on the anime. But I hope we get to see him fight in the Vytal Festival Tournament where episode 1 of volume 3 premiered. Like volume 3 the story's tone, imagery, and elements will be a bit darker, more mature and serious. That trailer kind of reminds me of the teaser trailer of Jurassic World (2015 film), it does get a bit creepy, especially the music. This chapter is just the beginning. And I can't wait for the next story. This probably the first RWBY/Primeval crossover you will ever make. So let's get roaring, growling, snarling, hissing, biting, chomping, and stomping, yeah.

2/28/2016 c39 Guest
A RWBY/Primeval crossover, because I think it relates to England, so why not make! Obviously I know what the series is about so. If your thinking about a RWBY/Primeval crossover it is the most outstanding idea you ever had. It will be so cool to see Ruby and her friends, along with other characters dealing with Prehistoric and futuristic species of animals. Impressive, very impressive. Also I want to apologize for thinking that you should do the crossovers I told you about, you were perhaps right. They were too childish for teen rated show. So I got your hint, a RWBY/Primeval crossover. Oh and make sure you put the main theme song for the intro. It will be cute to see Blake taking care of the Sid and Nancy the two Diictodons and Weiss taking care of Rex the Coelurosauravus. Also Primeval is a little more adult I know, why because of the gore and blood, not to mention it does some times have scary moments. But what I like about the series is that it looks like a TV series spin off of the Walking with Prehistoric Earth series (Which I like to call it).Why? Because every prehistoric species of animals we see that live in their different and respective prehistoric eras and time periods look like they were from the documentary series. So there is that so, please why not make it, I'am so going to enjoy it. While the huntsman and huntresses deal with the creatures of Grimm, they also need to deal with the animals from the past and the future, of course they won't kill them, unless they are carnivores (Even though like the herbivores they have to return them to the past and the future as well even if they kill humans and Faunus).

2/27/2016 c1 6Qopster
I'm gonna read more, so maybe you fix this, but there's something that bothers me. Your spacing. Nobody likes massive blocks of texts, it's why school books are boring. Add some more spacing and it'll attract more people. Just a peice of advice, whether you use it is up to you. Now if you excuse me, I have reading to do.

2/27/2016 c38 Guest
Chapter 39 please, and I want to see those two more stories. I also I'm sending you a request, A RWBY/The Land Before Time crossover, RWBY/Dinosaur crossover, RWBY/Ice Age crossover, RWBY/Brother Bear crossover, and a RWBY/The Good Dinosaur crossover. First crossover story you will be making is a RWBY/The Land Before Time crossover.

2/26/2016 c37 Guest
Fantastic story, please make chapter 38 and those two more stories that you will make. While doing that, right now I want to send you a great and noble request. I want you to make four stories, a RWBY/The Land Before Time crossover, a RWBY/Dinosaur crossover, a RWBY/Ice Age crossover, a RWBY/Brother Bear crossover, and a RWBY/The Good Dinosaur crossover. Those are your requests, please make the stories, because so far this story I got to say was always an awesome. You've done a really good job. Now make chapter 38 and those two more stories you're going to make and those four crossover stories please.

2/24/2016 c37 Guest
Make chapter 38, and 2 more stories. Then If you can try make a RWBY/The Land Before Time crossover, RWBY/Dinosaur (2000 Walt Disney film), RWBY/The Good Dinosaur (2015 Disney/Pixar film), RWBY/Brother Bear crossover, and finally a RWBY/Ice Age crossover. Those are your requests now let's get going shall we.

2/23/2016 c37 Guest
Well if it's only the beginning why not go to chapter 38, even this is the last chapter. Oh and can you try to make a RWBY crossover with The Land Before Time, Walt Disney's Dinosaur, or The Good Dinosaur. What about a RWBY crossover with Ice Age, since you love dinosaurs like I do. You've done a very good job making this story of epic prehistoric proportion I give a two thumbs up. Now come on make those crossovers.