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for Kamen Rider OOO with something else

11/17/2016 c1 5Spidey Viewer
Ok, dude. The idea is interesting, but HOLY RUN-ON SENTENCE, BATMAN!

1: BREAK THESE INTO PARAGRAPHS! Seriously, mountains of text not broken up into paragraphs is painful and confusing to the eyes.
2: Stop with the run on sentences. Use appropriate punctuation and conjunction!
3: Work on your grammar. There are a lot of cases where there's misspellings, words missing, little to no punctuation, and a need for capitalization.
4/28/2015 c5 8D.N.S Akina
Dragon Knight, cool choice. I hope Kit/Maya as couple
4/22/2015 c1 12Toa Solaric
Can't you space out your paragraph? Since I have trouble reading it.
4/21/2015 c3 8D.N.S Akina
I though he name gamel

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