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for Jesus A New Spring Time

1/20/2017 c1 21MistressOfImladris
This is a really good poem! Good work!
4/18/2015 c1 21Psycho Tangerine
Wow, your last guest reviewer is such a genius (sarcasm intended). You should change 'scurrying' to 'scurry'. This was a nice little story.
4/14/2015 c1 1021softballstar
Awesome poem about Jesus! Love him! And your poem! (I'm Catholic, too)

My note would be just re read the first few lines, a few grammatical errors, like "the chirping of birds fills..."

Another note would be to put the poem in bold it italics, therefore it is easier to identify what is the poem and what is an "author's note".

Awesome job!
4/14/2015 c1 34ThurinRanger
This was beautiful! I love all the animal pictures at the beginning, and then the important message at the end. Great job!
Thurin

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