6/29 c1 Guest
I wish you'd just paid more attention to proofreading. "I would've known exactly what meant." "Are getting another out of town?"
I wish you'd just paid more attention to proofreading. "I would've known exactly what meant." "Are getting another out of town?"
6/27 c1 MadMooey18
I like it. I read the first one but can’t remember it so feel like I’m starting at the beginning. I really like the premise and how you are writing it. I’m good to read whatever you give.
I like it. I read the first one but can’t remember it so feel like I’m starting at the beginning. I really like the premise and how you are writing it. I’m good to read whatever you give.
6/12 c3 NeeNee246
I am very excited to read more of this story! I hope some day you will continue it! ;)
I am very excited to read more of this story! I hope some day you will continue it! ;)
1/30/2022 c3 biblepam
I can understand how much more difficult it would be to stand in as a pretend girlfriend as opposed to just a date.
I can understand how much more difficult it would be to stand in as a pretend girlfriend as opposed to just a date.
1/25/2022 c3 ClaceLover08
i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward
i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i love Bella & Edward
9/7/2021 c2 lovinmich
I’m glad to hear that you are feeling better. Being able to pull yourself out of depression is not easy and I think you are a very strong person. This is a great chapter and I’m looking forward to the rest of the rewrite!
I’m glad to hear that you are feeling better. Being able to pull yourself out of depression is not easy and I think you are a very strong person. This is a great chapter and I’m looking forward to the rest of the rewrite!
12/6/2020 c2 Cme074
Awesome! I understand how you feel. My depression has been on a rollercoaster ride this year. I am excited for this story and look forward to reading the chapters to come!
Awesome! I understand how you feel. My depression has been on a rollercoaster ride this year. I am excited for this story and look forward to reading the chapters to come!
6/2/2020 c21 m0t0b33
Oohhh yeah, go for it... you could rewrite it and then pull this version, and post the new version on an update schedule like you would with a new story. Another writer has done a similar thing with their story and it turned out great.
Oohhh yeah, go for it... you could rewrite it and then pull this version, and post the new version on an update schedule like you would with a new story. Another writer has done a similar thing with their story and it turned out great.