for Moon Called8/21/2019 c5 Guest
Please update, I love it
Please update, I love it
7/9/2017 c5 Guest
please keep writing its so hard to find a good fic but this one is one of the best ive read
please keep writing its so hard to find a good fic but this one is one of the best ive read
11/10/2015 c5 
2Rubellite Game
This story is awesome, I really like how you've included all the kids instead of focusing on just one. Keep up the good work!
2Rubellite GameThis story is awesome, I really like how you've included all the kids instead of focusing on just one. Keep up the good work!
10/21/2015 c3 4Bruianor
wasn't Jack supposed to be a werewolf AFTER we was brutally mauled by the giant monster wolf whilst the 'bots were fighting over the star saber?
4Bruianorwasn't Jack supposed to be a werewolf AFTER we was brutally mauled by the giant monster wolf whilst the 'bots were fighting over the star saber?
10/2/2015 c4 DBlade59
Ok this story has lost my interest half way thought the chapter. The story was good the first to chapter then I lost interest in the 3rd chapter when Jack father showed up and was said that he is a werewolf which at that point it just got weird as it went along. You're a good writer and should continue if you want, this story just isn't my taste.
Ok this story has lost my interest half way thought the chapter. The story was good the first to chapter then I lost interest in the 3rd chapter when Jack father showed up and was said that he is a werewolf which at that point it just got weird as it went along. You're a good writer and should continue if you want, this story just isn't my taste.
10/2/2015 c2 DBlade59
so far it really good, if I were to make any suggestions or ideas for later in the story it would be to pair Jack and Miko and maybe make her a werewolf also, ok now to read the next chapter
so far it really good, if I were to make any suggestions or ideas for later in the story it would be to pair Jack and Miko and maybe make her a werewolf also, ok now to read the next chapter
8/30/2015 c5 8Mystearica 'Primal' Fende
I'm waiting, and waiting, and waiting, for this super duper awesomest one-of-the-best story to be continued, I'm waiting, dudettes I'm waiting...
8Mystearica 'Primal' FendeI'm waiting, and waiting, and waiting, for this super duper awesomest one-of-the-best story to be continued, I'm waiting, dudettes I'm waiting...
8/17/2015 c5 Guest
This is great keep it up
This is great keep it up
8/7/2015 c5 49Nipan and Yuputka
This was so terrible/sad! Poor Jack killed humans! Man. Good thing he wasn't around Miko and Raf! Damn. Very good story. You left a cliffhanger though! You are an amazing writer, keep up the good work.
49Nipan and YuputkaThis was so terrible/sad! Poor Jack killed humans! Man. Good thing he wasn't around Miko and Raf! Damn. Very good story. You left a cliffhanger though! You are an amazing writer, keep up the good work.
8/6/2015 c5 Guest
HM, very interesting, so something is wrong with jack, very interesting indeed, I do look forward to the next chapter.
HM, very interesting, so something is wrong with jack, very interesting indeed, I do look forward to the next chapter.
8/2/2015 c4 Secret
DAMN!Miko, you are a boss! And this chapter is confusing -.-
DAMN!Miko, you are a boss! And this chapter is confusing -.-
8/2/2015 c4 OPIv2
Good Story so far. I like the idea of Jack and his father being werewolves and i hope that the Story will be continued.
Good Story so far. I like the idea of Jack and his father being werewolves and i hope that the Story will be continued.