for What I Did on my Week Off10/8/2015 c6 
56chadtayor020
I'm rooting for Mao now. Hope this thing with him and Mai goes somewhere. They deserve some good from all the crap that happened to them.
56chadtayor020I'm rooting for Mao now. Hope this thing with him and Mai goes somewhere. They deserve some good from all the crap that happened to them.
9/24/2015 c5 Guest
That was great.
That was great.
8/9/2015 c4 Guest
That's pretty funny.
That's pretty funny.
8/9/2015 c3 Guest
Well done Jakuzure.
Well done Jakuzure.
8/4/2015 c3 8Aqua X
I thought this was entertaining and I think the extra touches you added made it by far better because it showed some of the wits and effort you use as a writer.
8Aqua XI thought this was entertaining and I think the extra touches you added made it by far better because it showed some of the wits and effort you use as a writer.
7/19/2015 c1 Guest
The description reads what the rest of the elite four did, but you only wrote what happened to Inumuta. Pretty dissatisfied
The description reads what the rest of the elite four did, but you only wrote what happened to Inumuta. Pretty dissatisfied
5/7/2015 c1 RavenKing77
Inumuta: Honesty now, who would leave something so important as a three-star uniform just lying around, while they took a bath?
Me: (Shifts eyes side to side nervously) Ah yeah your right, honestly who would um, do such a thing?
Inumuta: Honesty now, who would leave something so important as a three-star uniform just lying around, while they took a bath?
Me: (Shifts eyes side to side nervously) Ah yeah your right, honestly who would um, do such a thing?
4/19/2015 c1 jonjames427
i wonder if you know the greek story of the king (can't recall his name) who was killed by his wife when he was told to remove his armor to take a bath.
i wonder if you know the greek story of the king (can't recall his name) who was killed by his wife when he was told to remove his armor to take a bath.