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6/7/2015 c4 3Ara Catin
It's great how you've incorporated the attributes of their godly parents to be problems that you'd run into with a friend even if you are a mortal!

Also Jason, you dope.
6/7/2015 c3 Ara Catin
Percy is SO charmingly adorable. I like that you've really captured his energy. Also PIPER talk about people turning into their mothers, am I right? Her inquisition of poor Annabeth is pretty hilarious, and Jason is just along for the ride. The refund joke is so wonderfully Percy and the reaction is just so Annabeth. I used to not really like AUs, but this has got me hooked. You've done a great job of capturing the characters and putting them in a whole new context. Which is I guess, the definition of an AU, but often people don't achieve it as well as you do.
6/3/2015 c1 3TheLastInspiration
I love this chapter. Your writing flows really well and I like your use of language, the vocabulary is extremely impressive. I like the humour in this, kind of YA, it's actually very relatable! The description is very nice, I like the whole mortal set up.

Character introduction is something I envy, I can't do it that well yet.

I don't have a lot of time on my hands, but I'll try to read the chapter as fast as I can.
6/1/2015 c6 28sleepyaugustus
Dan I am literally so impressed right now
6/1/2015 c6 1Monojir6
Great chapter. I didn't mind the sexual content. Since I am mature for my age. But is there gonna be another part, cause at the end of the chapter it implied it was carrying on. Or are you gonna skip to the morning where they wake up? Hope you update soon! Thanks
6/1/2015 c6 jessica jasso
update soon. loved the chapter by the way.
5/31/2015 c6 CG
.Awesome.
5/31/2015 c6 2all-things-olicity
Wow...that was...I have no words...Well worth the wait. Update soon! I can't wait to see where this goes!
5/31/2015 c6 20PARN of hero
Soooo hot! That was... I have no words.
5/31/2015 c6 6FlawlessCatastrophe
Uh... I guess I'm happy for them and all, but I was seriously not expecting that...
5/31/2015 c6 HunterRightHere
Holy crap I was not expecting that. That was fantastic, though I seriously fear and im quite excited about the potential angst that could stem from this... Great update sir
5/31/2015 c6 PUGA1414
O-O
5/31/2015 c6 10kateflowrchild13
Yay! Finally!
5/31/2015 c6 1Shuuwai
Oh dang.
I didn't expect this... really didn't :o
5/31/2015 c6 Jedi1
Finally. Now things get super complicated.
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