
5/17/2015 c5
83SomethingMoreCreative
DAN HOW DID I NOT REVIEW THESE TWO CHAPTERS SOONER
But seriously, I'm loving this fic and where you're going with it. It's incredible so far and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Piper and Annabeth's conversation in Ch 4 was awesome, and I love how Annabeth and Jason are best friends. That's so cool.
AND PERCABETH DATE AHAHAHA AMAZING
Percy being part of an elderly bowling league?! It's legit so perfect, and I think their date was perfectly paced for the story.
I hope you're doing well, and I can't wait to read more of this story!
-Rachel

DAN HOW DID I NOT REVIEW THESE TWO CHAPTERS SOONER
But seriously, I'm loving this fic and where you're going with it. It's incredible so far and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Piper and Annabeth's conversation in Ch 4 was awesome, and I love how Annabeth and Jason are best friends. That's so cool.
AND PERCABETH DATE AHAHAHA AMAZING
Percy being part of an elderly bowling league?! It's legit so perfect, and I think their date was perfectly paced for the story.
I hope you're doing well, and I can't wait to read more of this story!
-Rachel
5/13/2015 c5 Read-Write-Love1812
Please update! I love the story and your writing is amazing!
I can't wait for more!
Please update! I love the story and your writing is amazing!
I can't wait for more!
5/10/2015 c5
28sleepyaugustus
YOU DID NOT
it was perfect so now I'm scared you're going to hurt them. and let me just say the faCT THAT PERCY IS INVOLVED IN A SENIOR CITIZENS BOWLING GROUP. I CANT DAN I CANT. also the PIZZA THING. I didn't know that was this story! I'm grinning so hard!
but yeah I feel like I should be angry at you for TOYING WITH MY BABES FEELINGS. WHATS YOUR PLAN HERE DAN? HUH? TRYNA HURT MY BABES. DONT YOU DARE. I'll end u
great chapter! :)

YOU DID NOT
it was perfect so now I'm scared you're going to hurt them. and let me just say the faCT THAT PERCY IS INVOLVED IN A SENIOR CITIZENS BOWLING GROUP. I CANT DAN I CANT. also the PIZZA THING. I didn't know that was this story! I'm grinning so hard!
but yeah I feel like I should be angry at you for TOYING WITH MY BABES FEELINGS. WHATS YOUR PLAN HERE DAN? HUH? TRYNA HURT MY BABES. DONT YOU DARE. I'll end u
great chapter! :)
5/9/2015 c5 Liv
Awesome chapter!
Awesome chapter!
5/9/2015 c5
1Ksky10
Every update is so good! I hope you have as much fun writing it as I do reading it!

Every update is so good! I hope you have as much fun writing it as I do reading it!
5/8/2015 c5 Becky
That was amazing.
That was amazing.
5/8/2015 c4 Becky
you are a very good writer and almost as good as Rick. P.s. last coment I sent I made myself sound like a slow reader but I'm not.
you are a very good writer and almost as good as Rick. P.s. last coment I sent I made myself sound like a slow reader but I'm not.
5/8/2015 c3 Becky
interesting, really good. Please don't juge me on my spelling I'm to teird
interesting, really good. Please don't juge me on my spelling I'm to teird
5/8/2015 c2 Becky
that's amazing. It's as good as anything I've ever read
that's amazing. It's as good as anything I've ever read