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9/6/2019 c1 catspats31
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"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

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11/17/2004 c1 kris
please write a sequel...you know whatr its annoying to read a story like this...

i dont mean a thing here...what i mean is it is more interesting if you write a story about HANAMICHI and KAEDE...thats all...

i hope you will write a story about that two guys...

jja ne

arigatou
11/9/2004 c1 Lissem149
Very very original! I just love it...
5/12/2003 c1 Guest
good lemon! continue it with Sakuragi. the more the merrier!
5/12/2003 c1 Guest
good lemon! continue it with Sakuragi. the more the merrier!
5/12/2003 c1 Guest
good lemon! continue it with Sakuragi. the more the merrier!
2/7/2003 c1 Zabina
Wow! It's... Special. But i love it! you can feel Ru's love for Hamamichi... And the lust with Maki... it's quite an interesting idea!
1/19/2003 c1 Kimiji
Wow! a Makiru? It's really original, especially with the 'Hanamitchi-idea' included, i love it!

i hope you wanna write a sequel!
1/19/2003 c1 Kimiji
Wow! a Makiru? It's really original, especially with the 'Hanamitchi-idea' included, i love it!

i hope you wanna write a sequel!
1/13/2003 c1 Luna
Wow... i usually dun like ru with somebody else than Hanamichi, but here... You manage to make a MakiRu with Hana 'involved' (at least in the feelings... ^^), a LEMON at that and... It's just perfect!

And this Maki... *blush* Such calm in what he's proposing! He's really someone...
12/14/2002 c1 fem
MakiRu? It's quite original! And I du hope you wanna write the RuHana sequel... even if for me, most of your fic involving the two of them could very well appear in the same universe and so, be the sequel! But that it dun stop you from actually writing one...

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