5/8/2015 c3 aryalyn
I don't know what you have planned for the story but it would be a touch revenge like if Bella becomes a vamp and makes Susan a snack. Just saying. You know, for all of us that have had a person like that in our lives :)
I don't know what you have planned for the story but it would be a touch revenge like if Bella becomes a vamp and makes Susan a snack. Just saying. You know, for all of us that have had a person like that in our lives :)
5/7/2015 c3 natcityjp
Alice is sweet to be there for Bella and listen and just be a friend. I can't wait to see how this develops and they grow closer. Do you plan to keep to canon Alice's part of the story with James? I'm looking forward to reading your next twists and turns with these two ladies. Thanks!
Alice is sweet to be there for Bella and listen and just be a friend. I can't wait to see how this develops and they grow closer. Do you plan to keep to canon Alice's part of the story with James? I'm looking forward to reading your next twists and turns with these two ladies. Thanks!
5/6/2015 c2 1xxDark Angel Babyxx
Please update ASAP! I hope they both become vampires and meet the Cullen's together!
Please update ASAP! I hope they both become vampires and meet the Cullen's together!
5/1/2015 c2 Guest
This story is great! Keep going please!
This story is great! Keep going please!
4/29/2015 c2 Guest
also asylum didn't " treat " homosexuality back than it was handle by the church and hospital control by them.
also asylum didn't " treat " homosexuality back than it was handle by the church and hospital control by them.
4/29/2015 c1 Guest
could have been good but a women as head of a department in an hospital or asylum is even less realist than vampire living among us right now.
could have been good but a women as head of a department in an hospital or asylum is even less realist than vampire living among us right now.
4/29/2015 c2 natcityjp
This doctor scared me. I wonder what Peter is doing working there? In enjoying the story so far, thanks!
This doctor scared me. I wonder what Peter is doing working there? In enjoying the story so far, thanks!
4/29/2015 c2 aryalyn
I don't believe I have come across a story with them meeting AT the asylum. I'm enjoying how well written it is. You are capturing how bad asylums were back in the day. Way worse than they are now. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
I don't believe I have come across a story with them meeting AT the asylum. I'm enjoying how well written it is. You are capturing how bad asylums were back in the day. Way worse than they are now. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
4/16/2015 c1 natcityjp
That was pretty good. The asylum seems really scary. I think you've set this story up with a really good starting point. I hope you give it a short and write more. Thanks.
That was pretty good. The asylum seems really scary. I think you've set this story up with a really good starting point. I hope you give it a short and write more. Thanks.
4/16/2015 c1 AquaHime
I think that this will be an interesting read! It is nice to see a new story involving this pairing. It will be exciting to see where you go with this. So far,you're off to a wonderful start.
I think that this will be an interesting read! It is nice to see a new story involving this pairing. It will be exciting to see where you go with this. So far,you're off to a wonderful start.