8/12/2015 c12 7jh831
another good chapter.
I like bella's transition.
hope you have Bella get over her not wanting to hurt human thing quickly.
also hope you keep Bella as a human drinker for the whole story.
looking forward to the next chapter.
another good chapter.
I like bella's transition.
hope you have Bella get over her not wanting to hurt human thing quickly.
also hope you keep Bella as a human drinker for the whole story.
looking forward to the next chapter.
8/12/2015 c12 2Elphaba Cullen
Another great chapter, the pig touch was so sad and beautiful. Can't wait for more. Love how you're taking the time to really develope the plot and the characters.
Another great chapter, the pig touch was so sad and beautiful. Can't wait for more. Love how you're taking the time to really develope the plot and the characters.
7/27/2015 c11 1c4bb
Wow! I am definitely intrigued with how everything will play out. Bella's tipping point was done superbly. I feel so badly for Bella, but I can't blame her for thinking everyone has used/left her.
Wow! I am definitely intrigued with how everything will play out. Bella's tipping point was done superbly. I feel so badly for Bella, but I can't blame her for thinking everyone has used/left her.
7/23/2015 c11 Guest
More pls i can't wait to long for the next chapter.
More pls i can't wait to long for the next chapter.
7/22/2015 c11 Guest
update faster pls
update faster pls
7/21/2015 c11 Guest
Love this so much! I'm so excited for more chapters
Love this so much! I'm so excited for more chapters
7/20/2015 c11 Guest
That escalated quickly... :)
That escalated quickly... :)
7/20/2015 c11 Viva33
I si love this chapter. I believe that despite james's ulterior motive with bella, he really did relate to her somehow.
I si love this chapter. I believe that despite james's ulterior motive with bella, he really did relate to her somehow.
7/21/2015 c11 Hope6968
Really great. Love when Bella gets mad. Can't wait to see your new born Bella. Thank you, Hope.
Really great. Love when Bella gets mad. Can't wait to see your new born Bella. Thank you, Hope.
7/21/2015 c11 2Elphaba Cullen
Another amazing insitful and emotionally accurate chapter
Go Bella!
Thanks again for writing this Bellice. I'm so looking forward to the next (hopefully much longer ) chapter! ;)
Another amazing insitful and emotionally accurate chapter
Go Bella!
Thanks again for writing this Bellice. I'm so looking forward to the next (hopefully much longer ) chapter! ;)
7/21/2015 c11 kenny.steele.543
Dude no revenge on Alice it wasn't her fault she tried to get Peter to go back,have Bella get revenge on peter intead
Dude no revenge on Alice it wasn't her fault she tried to get Peter to go back,have Bella get revenge on peter intead
7/20/2015 c11 7jh831
just for kicks, have bella create the punisher logo and wear it while she takes her revenge
just for kicks, have bella create the punisher logo and wear it while she takes her revenge
7/13/2015 c10 13N7 Greek-Valkyrie
Poor, poor nieve Bella. I look forward to more, especially Alice and Bella being reunited and Bella realizing she is being used by James, and that Alice would never hurt her.
Poor, poor nieve Bella. I look forward to more, especially Alice and Bella being reunited and Bella realizing she is being used by James, and that Alice would never hurt her.