5/22/2016 c1 senrei
Pleeease don't make this a oneshot, I loved it sooooo much!
Pleeease don't make this a oneshot, I loved it sooooo much!
1/12/2016 c1 13blackmistress
Wow, I absolutely loved this plot! there is so much detail that was put into this, really good job. But next time maybe u should get a friend, or even co~fanfictioner to read it over and edit some grammer mistakes and help build the flow to the stories. I remember getting the same advice from a review as well, and it helped me, I hope tht this can help u as well! lol, if u'd want any advice, just let me know.
Wow, I absolutely loved this plot! there is so much detail that was put into this, really good job. But next time maybe u should get a friend, or even co~fanfictioner to read it over and edit some grammer mistakes and help build the flow to the stories. I remember getting the same advice from a review as well, and it helped me, I hope tht this can help u as well! lol, if u'd want any advice, just let me know.
10/27/2015 c1 Guest
Couldn't even get halfway through it. The way you write and word things irritates me.
Couldn't even get halfway through it. The way you write and word things irritates me.
4/16/2015 c1 PandaHat97
That was adorable x3
Although I don't think it quite normal to refer to lemon as adorable.
Thank you so much :)
That was adorable x3
Although I don't think it quite normal to refer to lemon as adorable.
Thank you so much :)