for Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherin
23/9 c130 acowles02
Ok I said what the hell to the last chapter, but what the fuck was the beginning to this one. And why does it make sense
Ok I said what the hell to the last chapter, but what the fuck was the beginning to this one. And why does it make sense
3/8 c94 acowles02
Well that implies the house elves treat it as some sort of gain, for whoever can be the best house elf
Well that implies the house elves treat it as some sort of gain, for whoever can be the best house elf
3/8 c82 acowles02
Uhh. Remind me to never go into the house elf dimension. That has to be positively terrifying.
Uhh. Remind me to never go into the house elf dimension. That has to be positively terrifying.
3/8 c81 acowles02
I mean fudge is actually a reasonable person in this. This ain’t the 1200s and with what’s happening, the wards need to be updated
I mean fudge is actually a reasonable person in this. This ain’t the 1200s and with what’s happening, the wards need to be updated
3/8 c77 acowles02
Damnnnnn….. that makes too much sense and gets me in the feels. Now I pity the snakey
Damnnnnn….. that makes too much sense and gets me in the feels. Now I pity the snakey
3/7 c1 LordLordyLord
I'll be honest to anyone curious about this story. It's a teenage, angst-filled mess. And worse yet, it's that, but all the children try to talk like adults. They just sound like their pretending to be adults, though. It's pretty bad.
At least the author notices it, and it's not my place really to say, but this story reads like it's more a diary than a book. That's not a good thing. Author, if something is going on in your life, and it truly is that bad, talk to someone you trust. I've been down a similar road before. Don't keep it bottled up, or it will haunt you for years. No matter how many times you get revenge through words on a page.
I'll be honest to anyone curious about this story. It's a teenage, angst-filled mess. And worse yet, it's that, but all the children try to talk like adults. They just sound like their pretending to be adults, though. It's pretty bad.
At least the author notices it, and it's not my place really to say, but this story reads like it's more a diary than a book. That's not a good thing. Author, if something is going on in your life, and it truly is that bad, talk to someone you trust. I've been down a similar road before. Don't keep it bottled up, or it will haunt you for years. No matter how many times you get revenge through words on a page.
3/7 c50 acowles02
I mean. Snap never seemed like a good teacher to me in other fictions, but here, he is GOOD. He’s literally preparing all of his students to take the most important exams of their lives from day one, their first year.
I mean. Snap never seemed like a good teacher to me in other fictions, but here, he is GOOD. He’s literally preparing all of his students to take the most important exams of their lives from day one, their first year.